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I really like the dynamics between the two but all the "pheromone this pheromon that" explanations make it seem like this story is written by an amateur who tries to act like a big shot. Good writers show, don't tell. This is a trademark of unskillful writing. We have such a green flag seme and a cute, funny uke. This story has a great potential of a fun ride. I hope the author improves themselves in the near future.