Bro someone isekai in Sarah's body pls and make her act honestly towards asel. She's kind but denies it :(( I felt bad when she didn't get to apologize.
THIS is how you make a cute female lead without watering her character down into some bimbo. The female lead can stand on her own and has just the right amount of innocence to her that it doesn't make her look completely stupid. I love this. Male lead matches her perfectly. He's not too detached to the point that he's an irredeemable asshole.
I've read one before this which kind of has the same plot of "I married the daughter of my enemy to use her and bring them down" and I just felt like the female lead was written to be too dependant on the male lead where her only characteristics was that she'd help him catch bad guys. Other than that, there wasn't a strong sense of individuality and depth into her character making the male lead stand out.
Long rant sorry I just find this refreshing.
The biological dad looks ugly af like he deadass looks like a side character
He can just jump out the balcony at this point imo
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Dude either has amnesia and the other guy tries his best to make him remember or he just gets badly injured and the other guy gets stuck nursing him back to health by force.
Still on chapter one but when I tell yall the gasp I let out when I saw that pointy chin. Like man could open his mouth and his chin would pierce through the earth's core and come out the other end unscathed. Mans don't need no weapon when could slice his opponent just by looking to the side
The Lombardi sisters are just so beautiful wtf like pls more of them in the next chapters
I'm sorry but girl grow a damn spine??? I love how fiesty you was with the other girl like come on be a bad bitch not a sad bitch
I love how they're both buff and not the twink × rich, buff man trope
Abel.. sobssss goodbye our big himbo your buff body will forever be missed
My plan is that I won't read this until it gets like 20+ updates then read the farthest one from this chapter to avoid the angst. It's like the angst never happened.
Y'all are so mean to Freya! She's been through a lot! I can see that she's really hurt and tired from everything! I wish I could just hug her neck until she turns blue :((
FUCKKK I SHOULD'VE STOPPED MY HAND FROM CLICKING VSHSBSKNZUZVZ I'VE WORKED SO HARD NOT TO READ THIS UNTIL IT HAS A LOT OF CHAPTERS SO I WOULDN'T SOB OVER CLIFFHANGERS BUT HERE I AMVSYVSUSBS FUCK MY SELF CONTROL