The characters dynamics with each other are heartffelt and interesting. I love watchign them interact. The FL is amazing. She is strong willed and firm. She's intelligent and brave. The best kind of character who values honesty, family and morality. I want to know more about her and watch her succeed. I would give and arm to see this story to it's completion. It's really good and it's got a PUPPER. THIS IS THE BEST!
She should have gone the karmic route and turned that mother fucker into a red snail! It's what he deserves! You knwo how many people would have been spared? I mean come on HOW THE FUCK am I suppose to empthize with a fucking semi-heartless murderer!? And not a murderer with feesable reasoning who kills like the usual ice cold bastard archetypes, he does it just for the lols. The only good thing about this story is the ML and she's kinda dumb too. But at least she's sweet and she's surrounded by good peeps. The knight on the other hand can eat all of my ass! I hated her. That coward attacked a dragon while it's back was turned when it was just minding it's own flippin business. Then she has the nerve to go to it's grave and cry? BITCH YOU KILLED IT! No amount of boo hoo I'm a knight woe is me, is going to change what you did. So ironically you got stabbed literally in back too. I feel bad for the dad though . . .oof just a bad day for everyone. This story's plot is so uninspired, but it has so much potencial. It's like crack . . . I really feel my body being destroyed the more I read it. The characters are forgetable and only seem to run on pure bullshit energy. I only pray that the end comes swiftly like the cold hands of a reaper.
absolutely, that would have worked so well and showed actual remorse but dedication to the job. The way it was done, the knight appears as a cowardly murder determined to take the dragon out. It makes feeling for her kinda hard because she is actually discouraged the dragon doesn't just die. If she had approached the dragon looking sad as she finshed the dead after a vlaient effort it would have spoken more about her character.
I mean I feel bad for the queen but really who really cares what happens to her, we dont' see enough of her to care about what happens. I would love to see more of her but like . . . .oh well. I wish the pacing would speed up honestly because I wanna see if there any romance to be had. Ya girls not spicy at all and I'm rooting for the teacher! Red head is also a bonus!
GUYS CHECK THE GENRE! This is a romance! What is wrong with you people?! Just because it's fiction doesn't mean it has to abide by your unrealistic standards. This girl has like ONE romantic experince so OF COURSE she's going to fall for him. He treats well and makes her feel special without her even having to ask. Also did you see the expression he made when he was all over her. Dude is getting into her. This is a romance I can really root for. I want to see these two heal each other. Even if they sleep together, they still have a long way to go before they're a real couple.
I have had it up to here with that little brat!!! I like kids but, I'm about ready to slap the taste out of that boy's mouth. After all that girl does for him and he turns on her like that? OOOOH hell no. I would have abandoned him after he burned my thread of hope. FL has more patience than me, because I would have been handing out the a** woopins like it was f***ing christmas.
You're not wrong and I think you're intitled to your opinion. He does make the situation funny at times. Although he wears at my patience because he's such a brat that he doesn't realize just how much he biting the hand that feeds him. Some may find the younger brother endeering or " cute" but it's hard to see him as anything but annoying when he's the olden version of an entitled brat.
I was starting to think it was over but then he whipped it out guys. OH BOY did they turn this around. I can't wait to see the look on that bitches face when thechapters start up again. OOOOOOOO BABY IT'S GONNA BE GOOD!!!!
thats one hell of a way to propose its soo nice but at the same time it makes me kinda furrious i thought he might say he will become the gurdian but they said they have to belong to the family yet it makes me angry thinking that she cant look after her brother just because she has no title and that will be solved just because she marries someone with satus like that alone would make her better in teaching her brother :( it kinda irritates me to think that the are still places in the world where such treatmen to woman or because of status are still normal it makes me wonder in what a weird world we all have to life so sad. also i thought at the beginning they said her father was a noble but a fallen one? and he died doesnt that mean she had some status still? or did i miss read that ?anyway i cant wait for the wedding and her finally being able to get her brother on the riht way and changning their future