I was expecting more... Lesbian. Idk how to word it. Scissoring, skin-on-skin, close contact... I LOVE butch dom femmes but idk, the story reminded me of mid bdsm yaoi with the way the top was acting. probably bc it's missing that likeability, that sympathy for the top? That development in the relationship? And bc there was very little passion involved, just a lot of generic smut. I really enjoyed this author's other story tho. Idk. 7/10. Not the worst, but not the best imho.
I was expecting more... Lesbian. Idk how to word it. Scissoring, skin-on-skin, close contact... I LOVE butch dom femmes but idk, the story reminded me of mid bdsm yaoi with the way the top was acting. probably bc it's missing that likeability, that sympathy for the top? That development in the relationship? And bc there was very little passion involved, just a lot of generic smut. I really enjoyed this author's other story tho.
Idk. 7/10. Not the worst, but not the best imho.
I WAS JUST THINKING THAT IT FELT LIKE A YAOI