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Imma just say this coming from someone who is a writer. This has no plot whatsoever, no kind of story to even really follow through. I mean seriously is there no writer on their team to help?? I mean one of the most important things about a story is a well written character. Like I feel for Doc but my god is he a doormat and whatever his name is he is just so awfully written. Like what are his motives? Why does he treat doc like that. I mean it's been almost 40 chapters and all I've gotten from this story is just sex ( nothing wrong with that) like there was so much potential for this. The sex scenes aren't even enjoyable because Doc doesn't even consent for like majority of them and that bitch ( don't know his name don't care) is so annoying. So much wasted potential for a story like this. Anyway you can agree to disagree I won't be offended
Edit: I did not expect people to be so offended by what I said