
I just don’t think Gege is a great storyteller tbh. He’s not the worst I’ve seen by any means but he’s not great.
The pacing is weird for this super drawn out fight. Way too many convenient plot twist secret moves that weren’t foreshadowed properly or just given a brief explanation that we are force fed to accept.
I don’t mind character deaths. I don’t. BUT, they have to be done really really well. We are getting deaths for the sake of deaths. It doesn’t make the story edgy - it just makes the audience lose the ability to invest in characters because what’s the point. Which also takes away from the reading experience. If I’m anticipating a character death, I want to be on the edge on my seat in anxiety about it. Now, it’s just like “meh, another one?” Like I wanna cry like a baby when a great charged dies. The fact that I don’t feel that from anyone in this manga says a lot about how they are written but more than that, the pacing of their stories. And some had the potential to really invoke that type of reaction with more time

She seemed sooo logical at first. Like how can you turn someone into this twisted person then be pissed because he’s twisted? Like girl, COMMIT.
Also, her choosing to neglect her son because of some man just pisses me off. They are both sociopaths but something about that reallyyyy rubs me wrong. She’s literally going to raise a son that’s just as convoluted as the both of them through no fault of his own. To an extent they chose their own paths, but their son is just getting the short end of the stick

Like his character is written SO well. He is a really complicated, flawed, and tragic but beautifully fleshed out character.
TBH when I first started reading it was hard for me to forgive him for what happened to Rapiel even if it wasn’t intentional l. Because like, what did you expect to happen? But man, the remorse and torture he willingly subjected himself through as a result of the guilt. Overall, he had such heart wrenching journey outlining his genuine desire to atone for his actions. Even in his second life, he tried to live in a way that atoned for his actions and genuinely tried to not become a nuisance to the Kloff and Rapiel. He was capable of learning from mistakes
Now Kloff…
That mf is a nuisance no matter which timeline he’s in. I

Chaeheon is so possessive. Like goodness, Jeongyun can’t even have friends without him getting in his feelings. And Jeongyun is still on high of the new relationship and his reciprocated feelings that he can’t even see the yellow flags. Thank goodness my boyfriend isn’t like this because I wouldn’t be able to deal with it

The most memorable line of this story is when Chunwoo’s brother looked at Ho-in and said “My brother really killed all of your confidence, didn’t he?”
And that line has continued to prover truer and truer with every chapter since. Ho-in bro just go find someone else. Nothing about this is a “Lucky Paradise”
My partner won’t even buy a bed without including me. Let alone a house. Reading things like this reminds how much better real life can actually be than fiction lol