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This is pretty interesting but can sometimes be confusing a little. Especially the part when all of a sudden something happens, I can't tell if it is a flashback, a dream, or if it is happening. For example, like in Chapter 16, on the last panel, that looks like a dream or flashbacks.
On the other hand, the way they talk sound like a cult, which seem kind of funny when they flirt and confession to each other.
Mc is an honest and straightforward person which is nice, and I like how he strong.
Overall, I just hope everything goes well for mc and ml.