I even forgot this manga existed but omg the side notes of the translator really made my day xD whoever you are, bless you for the good laugh I had x'DDDDD
it’s a coping mechanism
Anyone else is just reading this because of Daato and Juda? Cause I do xDU
(I already read all the raws somewhere)
Do you have the link for the raw? ヾ(☆▽☆)
Mo is just so precious
He Tian go give him some love
ヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ
The first story ruined the others (that let's be honest they weren't either magnificent ones, but at least not so openly friendly about abuse) it's a horrible story about an abusive man keeping the poor Shinobu for himself, if Shinobu were a girl this comic would have created a great ruckus like 50 shades of grey or others were they picture abuse as love, but his is yaoi after all, rape = love is its day by day basis. Sigh...
Yeah. Even though it showed hints that they might've loved each other, it was more of a lust. Plus, he treated him badly and being treated like a 'toy' doesn't make a good relationship.
I mean, SERIOUSLY?
Man, I can't stand all this trying to picture Ono as a victim and someone to be pitied, couldn't stand this comic going on and on about the same topic
IKR
Fuck, I managed to find the second part but not the third and last one, where the heck can I read it? e____e
For those who want to read the rest of "With Thou":
Chapter 2 (translated): https://mangapark.com/manga/morotomo/i1148044/c002.2
Chapter 3 (Japanese raw): https://drive.google.com/open?id=15pvtoTtYPxWxVwF6v6oRoj_P1-wMCTtL
It was fun to read and entertaining but the first sentence of the description is kind of off, rougher, odder and even taboo relationship in the yaoi gender? Don't shit me, I'm a person that doesn't really like the stereotypical yaoi stuff at all so it got my hopes up, don't get me wrong, I enjoyed the read because it had some funny moments but it was non other than the same cliche relationships, and when it looked it was going a little bit out of the ordinary the relationship was just half passed and we didn't even get to have a real deep look into it, if having the bigger guy being the bottom is "rough, odd and taboo" in this gender we're lost for good -_- sigh...
I meant half assed* damn autocorrect
I must confess this comic left me with a really bad and dissapointing aftertaste, the story was like... soulless and cold, the characters didn't have human reactions at all and didn't feel real, to be honest I was looking for an unriquited love story I could cry to (even though they always kinda end up good I wanted to heal my own broken heart crying a bit, an habit of mine) but I just ended up dissapointed and not feeling a thing from this, now I feel sad because this left an emptiness inside of me that makes me uneasy, so troublesome... And they were also going on and on over the same topic without advancing and with a really messy progression. So dissapointed...
For me the "soulless and cold" part was the appeal of this manga. It stood out and was strangely calming lol.
Sometimes a plain thing not too deep is good for the body, I agree, depending on my mood I sometimes just want to read something less complicated, but this time along with the plot trying to be complicated that lack of real plotting left it cold and soulless as an story itself, that's what I mean and that's what turned me off
Same. It seemed like the lil bro was leading the big bro, but he doesn't like him at all. Like, it's actually the lil bro getting sexually harassed, but either he doesn't care or he's the one suggesting it.
I'm surely seeing all these positive comments but as an artist and comic creator I cannot stay silent, this comic got amateur mistakes from the start, making it really difficult to follow in the most basic stuff like presenting characters and the situation itself, following poorly how an storyline should be done. It gets too dense just out of the blue and many things stay unclear, as far as also multiple mistakes in the position of the dialogues between characters and the ways to present them. Also the characters themselves are too stereotypical, and the storyline gets a ridiculous plot twist that makes me think the author didn't think much about how to tie the knots and just wanted it "to look cool"
I'm sorry but it was too boring to read, the rhythm of the storyline was messy and most of the time slow and the structure of the comic didn't help much about it, I found myself rolling eyes over and over and when I reached chapter 4 I just skipped half of the dialogues each page without any problems, because ma st of them where just empty narration to exaggerate the characters and the situation.
Also, these are minor issues compared to the other a but the study for ambiance and location was also poor, too Japanese to be focused on occidental culture, I can more or less understand that from a Japanese author as most find difficult to really picture occidental cultures and you can't help putting some of you (and your culture( in what you do, but trying as this was, to be a "serious" comic I find the lack of research dissapointing too.
I'm getting lazy so I'll leave it at that, also I don't think I need to point everything since I don't have the strength to re-read and analyse such a thing xDU I might get ahit about this post but needed to be said and it's my opinion, posted with objective information and analysis. So I'll leave it here.
I made quite some typos due to writing via phone but I think it's still understandable
Thank you for turning this into an effing class. Bye Felicia!!!
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This cosmic dance of bursting decadence and withheld permissions twists all our arms collectively, but, if sweetness can win, and it can, then i'll be here tomorrow to high five you yesterday, my friend. peace. See? i can sound deep and smart too!
Lemme critique your criticism; unorganized, meandering, incomprehensible and pedantic.
He doesn't want to rape me when he sees me = he has no feelings for me anymore
Yaoi logic ｗ（￣△￣；）ｗ！
There is more to this than them just not having sex anymore though...
Lmao YAOI LOGIC ε=ε=(▰˘∇˘▰)ノ