He Awakened When I Died
So many random, sudden time skips that fuck up the flow of the story. I've said it before and I'll say it again, if you don't know how to write a good story, don't make comics or start learning how to write better istg.
Otherwise, very basic story, I could predict the entire thing from the first few chapters. Typical 'oh no, I changed the story, gotta leave before something bad happens!'
Also, gurlie, u have magic - u could have just yeeted that arrow outta the way with a slightly strong gust of wind, com'on
Edit: she really decided to go for the whole hallucinogenic-grass-weed thing lmaoooo
Clever Cleaning Life Of The Returned Genius Hunter
The protagonist is an actual asshole and basically dies bc of it - he's sent back in time and is forced to do the work of someone he looked down on, slowly getting a LOT of character grown, we see him becoming a somewhat better person that cares for others, whether he realises it or not lol
What Happens When the Second Male Lead Goes on Strike
Is this bl??? Pls let it be a bl TToTT
Senior is Bad!