So, there's one thing I can't ignore... The proportions! The artist that drew this clearly wasn't used to drawing according to the proportions of an actual person. And, yeah, I get that there are ppl with different sizes, but the artist was more into drawing a cartoon character rather than an actual person (which means that their proportions became horrifically wrong.) They need more practice in drawing real people and observing how people move.
This artist is actually quite talented - and with this small adjustment they may find that their standard in art is so much higher. I can tell bc the parts where the proportions aren't too off are great! Not to mention the plot is kinda interesting and different from what I've seen before from reincarnation stories.
So yeah, keep improving and keep trying! (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
(This advice can apply to other ppl who draw too <3)
I really hate harem stories, but the girls aren't as involved in the plot as much as other mangas (like, there are girls, but it doesn't make me want to scream at them to get tf out lol).
rn, I really want to know what happens next - especially when it stopped after showing such a cool looking group of ppl (●'◡'●)ノ
So many plot holes... Not to mention it's really unclear about what happened to the black haired guy. He kissed her so I would have thought the protagonist would have thought about him a bit more.
Whatever, I just want to know what happens next ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ This is pretty interesting.