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Can we pls not normalize posting unfunny edits on here? Upload it on wattpad or something.
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I was inferring more to the fact that it might inspire others to make their own parodies of other manga and well end up with an endemic on our hands, but yeah that sucks. Bots are ruthless.
Also, could you maybe keep this fanfic within the constrains of only a few, relevant tags? Like, just mature and comedy. I know you’re tryna increase ur reach and stuff, but unless there is content that actually aligns with the other tags you have on this, I think it’d be right to remove them.
Ppl on here always whine and cry about users posting their own work on here and when people add the wrong tags to stuff, and I don’t get why you’re the exception lol
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Tryna figure out how this story could have ended better, but it’s difficult because everyone involved was fucked from the very beginning. If the author really wanted to swerve towards a happy ending, maybe there could be more scenes of the old guy and the mom getting closer and maybe the old guy would genuinely fall in love with her (it does seem like he did to some extent). MC declares he lost or whatever like in the original story, sex relationship continues even after old guy becomes his step father, maybe MC moves out/studies abroad, and at some point when he comes home to visit, the old guy shows no interest in bothering him anymore. Not really as a way to “redeem” the old guy, but at the very least assure readers that MC is safe from him and the guy now only has the hots for people his age.
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I didn’t come into this story expecting much (let’s be honest, most of us came here for the edgy smut) but the writing is soooo good and the inner conflict of the mc is done so well.
So many stories that try to deal with these topics depict Stockholm syndrome as developing in like, a single chapter, and suddenly the mc is ok with everything, but this story does it all so well. Like, it takes its time with establishing the little things that prime someone’s mind for Stockholm Syndrome, and it makes the story all the scarier because it’s clear the mc is genuinely losing to his inner battle against it /despite/ the fact he’s aware of it. Really just hammers in the fact that Stockholm Syndrome is a mental illness, and it doesn’t care how aware the person is of it or how hard they try to keep their rationality. Dare I say, it feels so much more “realistic”.
On that note… can someone check on the author of this manhwa…? Just in case… ╥﹏╥
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This story feels like it changes trajectory so sharply and often, like the creator had a very loose outline of what they wanted to see but didn’t really think of how it’d happen until the exact moment they had to publish the chapter.
I’m also kinda weirded out by the faces. They are jarringly simply drawn compared to the bodies, and it’s like they get stiffer with each chapter… the characters only really have two expressions: :0 and >;0. Like, close your mouth bb you’re gonna catch flies.
If y’all haven’t figured out that this is the kind of story where you need to shut your head off and just appreciate the pretty art, then this story ain’t for you lol
the fact that even if you dont read anything, it still doesnt help literally hurts me