This is actually 15 novel volumes long, with about 415 chapters total. I made it to chapter 125, really one of the more excellent ones. Cute all the way through, confusing at first and I think that's why it got a low rating.
This has a solid plot, has fewer than average timeskips and the Characters stay consistent in their performance throughout. It's definitely slow on Romance, but the connection between her and the ML from the holy kingdom is real. He's appeared already, the silver haired guy she keeps running into. They meet up several times after this.....
A few differences between the novel and Webtoon, some scenes are skipped or changed like her at the first ball being forced to over eat by oldest brother. [She throws up in a very dramatic way in the novel, getting bounced around by the new father, but think they had her fainting in webtoon instead. The novel actually talks about stuff like that, which is kind of comedic though makes the Characters feel more real.]
Makes it worth it to read both, I enjoy this series far more than thug baby gangster that just released. People who claimed it's super generic haven't nearly read enough and tbh it's clearer/more fun in beginning in actual novel. The webtoon I follow a bit more loosely and I actually liked the novels enough to buy all 15 on Google play. You can indeed translate it there in app, or just visit book toki with the KRN name in chrome so it pulls fully translated. ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
thanks for the review
I was wondering if I should read it or not
Can you DM me what book toki is? I tried googling but can't find it. Thank you!!
Own mtl of full novel, DROPPED BECAUSE THE ML IS TRASH WHO LET HER GET KILLED PRETENDING NOT TO KNOW HER AS THE HIDDEN FRIEND. No one noticed that, but yeah he's a betraying Selfish pos just like her fkd up parent and I never forgave any of them. They're trash who repeatedly repent after 60 chapters though before that and last life they were true garbage. The first life she trusted her killer, because she thought he was her 'hidden' lying stalker of a POS ML. Who never came forward that life to help her or even tell her who he is. Had to of known she was being abused as he kept visiting her as a hidden person... he does same bullshit this life too. Selfish and unforgivable creep. Both princes Fck her dad for being a ungrateful douche after she saved him and their army from starvation no less. He just was going to send her back, with zero guilt. Turned out he could of saved his wife and been a real dad but left them to rot last life and this one to fight for absolutely nothing. It was only required they be gone in svc for 3 months and he could of came home the entire time he left her ass to rot. GARBAGE MOFOE!!!!!
HE APOLOGIZED TOO LATE AT 60 CHAPTERS IN AND THIS IS AFTER HE WAS GOING TO THROW HER AWAY, TILL FINALLY NOTICING THE ABUSE FROM ANOTHER PERSON. NEVER CARED ABOUT HER BEFOREHAND. TRASH. TRASH FAMILY AND BOTH ML PRINCES. GARBAGE, read the novel and it never got better since they gloss over it and FL just like a fking id**t forgave immediately after finding out the retarded abandoning moron of a dad only gave embezzled money for the bare minimum of doing child support. Excuse you dumba**, child support doesn't mean sh*t and you didn't give a fck to check. It didn't get to her anyway. S.O.B. Her brother is just fking annoying. I don't like any of them, one of the worst BS child care things I read and shame it's more popular than Devil's Beloved Daughter or Baby Raising A Devil tbh. I made it over halfway through the full novel, but dropped it forever after how stupid everything was came out. (╬￣皿￣)凸
Bought all the novels, unfortunately after reading the spoilers I know this stupid story devolved to trash heap status around chapter 90. Zero resolution, they go "nice" and lose honor/integrity. Bow to the shitty useless new emperor and those corrupted nobles with zero reader satisfaction. It's trash garbage for the ending, DROPPING NOW 1*
They truly just white wash everything and the CP is never punished, neither is the OG FL and they just literally sign over everything to the shitty country. I got to book 2, webtoon is much closer to where they trade the Chade family policy to be evil.
They decided it was better to kneel to the nobles tha tdd kept attempting killing Rose and the rest. Plus they killed their cats for fun. It was a trash heap of zero satisfaction. Wtf.
Ugh, no wake up call for CP about his own faction attempting to kill the emperor or his faction of trash nobles getting punished. This author became garbage that forgives abusers. They are completely wiped of honor, integrity and money in the process. Stupid Rose saying to go this way, hate FL at End for this trash too. Waste of my money and time translating novel series I bought. Disgusting how they wrecked a good story! (╬￣皿￣)凸
This is for real?
I'm glad I read your post, so during this time I just waste my time ╥﹏╥
Okay so better I drop this story now .
Yep, I just read the spoilers after catching up to latest episode of webtoon praying for the Nobles and Prince to get punished. Read all of them, it was confirmed. Wasted my time too. Many were mad about it! ┗( T﹏T )┛
So disappointed ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
what? they get slapped in both cheeks, and they said thank you? what the hell?! that feels like shit
Lmfao,, I literally observed how dumb the new emperor are, im dropping this (｀Δ´)
It's a total of 6 novels, she married all of them in it and the setting allows for multiple ends. Including Bad Ends, in fact you can find it on Google chrome as the translated by browser option works there and it has most of it up for the Web Novel. ヾ(☆▽☆)
Ultimate harem. Ending with everyone
CHAPTER 9&10&11 ARE THE WRONG MANGA!!! WTF, STOP DOING THIS AND FIX IT!!!!!!!! IT'S BASICALLY CLICK BAIT GARBAGE WHEN YOU DO THIS!!!!! ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
Just finished all major plot points, at chapter 172 she is on her way to being married and it ends chapter 177. This was a flaming trash heap in some sections, the end was redundant and dragged out though skipped around POV stories Back Tracked randomly. The reason why she ended up there was truly tragic and awful. It has ZERO RESOLUTION for that tragic information either. She is basically god, though with a slave job towards building other worlds for other gods. They have a set amount of these children that dream these worlds to exist and when they expend them they break the childs soul apart without rest after forcing them through only truly abusive timeline realities. It's done by all the gods in all worlds to these children who gave life to everything they ruthlessly endlessly use them breaking apart at the end from the abuse. They claim unhappy dreaming god children are the only way all worlds are created, but the gods doing this to other god slave children are basically useless parasites and I would of hunted them down once fully a dragon. She just saved herself from her own god slave owner, but left the rest behind and condoned it through the god she helped build in the world she made from her unhappy childhood last life.... that god admitted it, that she is part of the administration doing this win all worlds. But this god was created by our MC, same as this world and all the people in it from her unhappy dreams. Disgusting. I would have gotten rid of the entire system of course. She is a god and bigger than these idiot parasitic creatures that claim to be gods but can't even build anything or create... they just live off these enslaved god children.. it left a bad taste. Really lame end and Romance came from zero plot just shoved in last 7 chapters. They also find out she was in stasis with her dead mum before another dragon helped deliver her a year after being buried by her family in the mom's stomach. Being told she killed her because it is just the way it works for another species. It was really bad last ten chapters, cool premises and excellent start. Decent transmigration reasons and world building though depressing asf at End obviously. Oh, she's immortal and has had to skip most of her childhood days in sleep between worlds so has almost no dad interaction later on. Wanted to drop it around chapter 130 again for that reason and him abandoning her too at times really was too much bs from him to make it enjoyable. Richard is definitely not ML, it's lucy.
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Wow , you read till the end , I give up on ch 144 ..... the story kinda not my liking after this 140 chapter.
Lol, it was a struggle because after chapter 105 it became obvious we were getting too many time skips. It lost its charm really fast, rated it 3 stars because honestly it was unbearable after chapter 130. The family was garbage afterwards, because she lost the reincarnation buff and they abandoned her during some ptsd inducing scenes. That was never really resolved either and all I could think was she should of stayed with Richard's dad from beginning. He was constantly trying to make sure she was okay with the old trashy family and fought to keep her adoption from the idiot who ended up with that title of Dad.
He really failed her at End, the cute moments were gone by the 130th chapter and she lost her life to sleep. The Romance was entirely forced, came out of nowhere with silver hair last 7 chapters. I say a third was decent and rest of plot garbage. The gods were annoying parasites compared to her and she just let it go. Ridiculous ending and middle...T.T I dropped it multiple times until I made it through all the heavy Sweet Potatoes without any cider. Thank you for noticing my pain.
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I really admire your struggle finishing this novel , I didn't want to give spoiler to those whose only see the manhwa . Is good in the beginning to middle ( novel ) but yeah after that...... I hands up.
Wow i’m kinda confused now. I read some spoilers that the dad rejected being immortal because he wants to reunite with her mom. And that the white haired guy is the ML. But no complaints about the story so farr, hopefully the manhwa turns better.
This mc created everything in this world through her unhappy childhood in her last life. She's immortal until her power is used up by the other gods/system administration members for creating more worlds through unhappiness in each reincarnation. The reason he, the father, abandons her near End multiple times is because he finds this out and that this world/everyone in it were created for her happiness.
Hence the reincarnation buff statement I made, it kind of pushed love at her to an obsession level. They rejected her right after the old system administration member tries hauling her back to continue to abuse the power she has till her soul breaks. They're called dream children and the star keepers are in charge of a few in multiple worlds they continue with her power to live in her creative worlds as a means of their parasitic existence. If the children stop, these gods become nothing and so do these worlds made for their pleasure through forcing the children to live multiple unhappy lives.
It really goes to Moon at End, starting around half way through the story this stuff comes out. Beginning and such is really good, but a third of way it starts breaking down and turning sour for plot. No cute moments after this stuff either and again, no real mother she created it all to escape the last world. In fact, the kid was dead and through being brought back by that other dragon who found her life signal she jumped in. Been dead a year in the created story and got really gruesome at this point. This is done through jumping into the Character of the daughter she created for him, basically the entire thing became redundant and her father just faded from plot at that point because they all found out from the star keeper jumping after her to repeat her misery of the eons she lived as their sl*ve dream child. Truly annoying end. Hope that explains it, also this is her last available life and whenever she dies the world disappears from existence along with all the people.
i respect u
Ehhh this was revealed at the near end of the story? Idk why but this kinda reminds me of Tsukuyomi from Naruto… Maybe they want to be unique but gosh that kinda sucks… Hopefully they change the story in the manhwa
Whut?!! This dude duke etam(?) abandoned her at the end???
Just enjoy for now and for at least 50 chapter's ahead .....before the heart breaking part near the end .
This had several iterations, they were removed for both the former novel and webtoon. This iteration is not my favorite and I started skipping around after chapter 20 because it just turned into a chop shop job of a 3rd version. It's gone to the moon now on plot and feels like a magical girl old school shoujo unfortunately.
The old version made so much sense and it got pretty far before being removed from here. She spent a bunch of time with her dad in Demon realm too getting closer without Joshua, plus had streamlined plot points and a better less loser dad's personality. He's trash and I won't forgive this version constantly neglecting her or abandoning her. The og FL is annoying in this iteration too. Plus ml pathetic since beginning. He does nothing but place lottie in danger multiple times and from of story abandoned her too. Ugh, I love lottie though it's unbearable to read now.... I'm sad old version was scrapped. (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Did the other version had the same name?
Both did, the original novel that was torn down by the creator at around same time first webtoon was scrapped.
Read to ch50 on novel, there's actually over 300 chapters and I have mtl of whole thing. It's now a webtoon, but I lost interest years ago when getting tired of trashy family redemption archs. Her older brother is straight garbage, doesn't get better for over 50 chapters and the kid didn't know their Name/Birthday or reason for mum's death[she thought her birth did it]. All because the dad was too lazy to talk to her during his "supposed" check ins at night. He supposedly checked on her physically at night randomly, but he's garbage for never noticing she slept like a sl*ve in rags and in a closet. He never defends her once picking her up either and she has to beg for attention, loser father of the year next to the one in Villainous Duke's Youngest Daughter novel and webtoon. They both have similar starts for MC too, and the chapter size becomes over 300 there as well. I own that one too and got to chapter 105 before skimming to end in mtl copy I made.... The families got worse there, not better.
This is a little better than that one, the family got better and less trashy starting with younger brother and father. Last to come around is that annoying trashy older brother, but he's irredeemable.
It was the father going away for a war campaign in return for Holy Water, that did nothing to save his sick wife, that our MC ended up abandoned at her location in beginning. He just handed her off, no real mention of punishment either for all those involved in the so called false reports he got on her during the campaign. Again, too trash to even talk to her once and she had to beg while he called her ugly to take her home to her family's house when he came back. So, it's a lie or the author forgot when explaining this that he did that and definitely did not come to originally pick her up. He would of left her there still. Trash garbage father. Period. Anyway, he justified it all that she was in danger from brothers while he was on campaign because she had no magic like they did. He claimed he came as soon as he could for her, which is a lie for just mentioned reasons. He apologized around chapter 14-19 while finding out barely she lived like a sl*ve whole time. Loser. Still left her to be bullied by everyone and treated like an outcast. Takes him more chapters to realize she has no name and no clear age. He's an irredeemable id***.
Moving on, game elements pop up with insidious consequences if she fails quests. She has to save through plots her family including the annoying ungrateful older brother, ugh trash heap whole family. It ends ambiguous on Romance and dropped a few, so harem with no real clear end besides family end with open romance left for one ML left. Forgot who. It's over 320chapters(〜￣△￣)〜
in the manhwua it showed she was sick when he visited her at night so it makes sense as to why he didn't wake her up, who wakes up a sick child at night lol and he wouldn't have left her there he didn't call her ugly well like he did but the fl realized he was talking about her clothes nd how she was dirty. So far I don't see her being treated as an outcast all of the servants adore her same w nobles. It's only her uncle, cousin, and his servants. He left the fl with her uncle because he said her uncle volunteered saying "a normal child needs a family" and yes also to protect her from whoever. How was he supposed to know she didn't know her age or name lol also it's ok, for now, that she doesn't know how her mom died ts traumatic for a kid to learn, she isn't a kid kid but he only knows her as a kid, if anything he's doing the kid a favor for not telling her
oh yeah but I didn't read the novel so idk
Why are you responding without having read anything, lmao? Own it and translated it myself, I'll stick with my summary thank you (︶︿︶)＝凸
This has over a hundred chapters and was never updated to even show chapters 37-49. I know it's basically finished in raws on new toki....
This is available on a few other sites for the completed translated material from ch1-65. I don't like reading it on other sites though.
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do you know who’s the ml?
Yeah, it's the mage guardian. She grows up near chapter 100.
that’s gross… they’re related plus he’s basically her dad. i’m glad you told me thanks
New toki has all of it, just not translated. It's way farther along than this. Papago translate works to change it to Eng, if you have two devices. One loads it and you use your phone to snap a picture it translates just fine.