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i saw some ppl say the pacing was too fast and ngl, i don't rlly see how. like the plot is pretty simple and it's kinda perfect for a short story and we know both of the mc have feelings for each other so i feel like it's kinda given that both of them will immediately get together once they know each other's feelings. idk i just don't see how the pace can be dragged any slower when the plot in itself isn't anything too complicated