
The story seems rocky and very..choppy how are there no comments about that?? Am I the only one thinking that??

Read the novel for better description u'll love it ლ(´ڡ`ლ)

if you haven't here http://www.novelupdates.com/series/shen-yin-wang-zuo/
Happy reading

Is it me or does it seem like the story just got a lot choppy. Am i the only one that's confused??

Nope. You're not the only one. The story doesn't seem to be able to concentrate on anything and is jumping to places. I'm not even really sure, why he must train so much.

Well i read a bit of the novel and there are a lot of missing events in the manga anyways he need to train inorder to reach a fetus stage or sthg
this stage is very powerful and people with it are respected and when he reaches it the master in the ball would teach him some powerful techniques and sooo..

When i got a notice that ten count got updated i was extremely happy, but when i got here, no chapters were uploaded and i was left there confused...until i read the comments. i followed the link (kurose.co.vu) and went to the translators website to read it, it wasn't a hard thing to do and i would do it all over again if it means i get to read the updates of ten count

http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/the_gamer/bt/mcw_chapter-121/pg-2/
I was hoping he would say "or you could marry me"

SAME

But but but......CAN he get pregnant? I mean he clearly has a vagina, i can see that, but does he have all the reproductive organs of a female?(like the eggs and tubes and all)
Hmmmmmmmmm interesting, very interesting

It's not impossible, but it's very rare. He just has to have a more developed female reproductive organ than he does male. But if his male side is more developed then chances are no.

Can someone tell me if this is at least boy x boy? If it isn't, then i might not want to read it ( ̄へ ̄)

Listen friend, we are not saying that the manga is not good, i dont even have the right to judge it since i havent read. But right now, at the moment we want to read bl, and as i said before, this manga is not what we are looking for..
But i will take your comment as a recommendation, if someday i feel like reading shoujo this will be the first on my list ( ̄へ ̄)
Ultimately i found your comment rude, Mostly in the 'fap material' part.
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You listen..1st of all we are not friends..Words like that pack a lot of weight and yes,enough to not use em for irony..Which irony is way more rude than a simple fact..It is fap material and there is nothing unnatural about it..If you found it rude its you that you find something natural as something shameful and call it "rude", which is rude indeed to the people that draw em, or is it you have a problem with the truth?Or was it the wording the problem?"Fap material" looks dirty..If i had said masturbation material or straight out porn(which it is, and its ok!) would that have offend you lees? .. Which on the other hand its pure hypocrisy since you do admit you like BL and you do judging a READING material purely by that since you dont read it elseway...You wrote nowhere"im not in mood for shoujo so i wont read it" instead you said you wont cause its not BoyxBoy..Do you get my point and the why i objected ms.Ironically "polite"? If you publicly say its not bl im not gonna read it expect to be judged.. as i would expect it if i went and wrote "It's BL im not gonna read it"..Cause i might be rude but i still like the truth..

You offering me se- anyway Moi? xD Still tho friends for me means a lot so i dont like it in sarcasm either..You guys can be, is cool, i might be the weird one so i dont like to be called that and with no meaning and to offend me..Well it worked didnt it?It did offend my intelligence..But you Moi you missed the whole point of what i said and stayed in 1 word.. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

Guys, im fine with reading shoujo, but i just feel like reading and submerging myself in yaoi and bl right now, you know that feeling?
Well if it's THIS good then i'll bookmark it and read it later. But seriously tho, that picture/ link of those two guys(?) kissing......"sigh" thought i found myself a brilliant shounen ai ╥﹏╥

Thats different Luca-chan said she likes the summary, the cover,the art, she even read the 1st chapter and liked it but because its not bl she s not gonna read it....The phrasing and the reason was what bothered me not what she likes..And to think i dont really like shoujo either cause i dont like romance in general but besides that it was at least funny, with good art and original story, unlike most shoujos with stupid romance as my wife also mentioned..But to say you wont read it just cause its not yaoi or bl while you'd like it otherwise i found that reason inadequate at the least..And yes Aurora we ll invite you to our marriage xD :p

Thats different..I dont like shoujos either, or yaoi or romance in general..I find it boring and especially if its like most typical ones as my wife/hubby(still dont know xD) Moi mentioned above..I mean who the hell tears up when they having sex?Even that annoys me..But i cant understand liking the story, the summary, the cover, the art and just cause its not yaoi not reading it..I really cant understand it..And yes different preferences of course but the reason not to read it the way Luca-chan put it i find it inadequate at the least..Say im only in the mood of reading yaoi now, thats at least understandable...As you did..Thats why i asked whats wrong with you people not reading it for that sole reason..If she/he had answered theres nothing wrong i just want to read bl it would ve been respected by me..But she resorted to irony just cause of the phrasing..Well calling it fap material doesnt mean you indeed have to fap to it, but it was what was drawn for, since yaois are mostly porn/ecci/smut/eroge/fap material....Stop being stuck in a word and stand in the substance for a bit..It was a reasonable question from me since i really didnt understand why..And i dont think irony was the way to answer my question..Oh and by the way we will invite you to our amazing marriage xD

I kind of know that feeling xDD
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Read the first chap, reaction: ohh helllllllll noooooo this is messed up
Read 2nd chap, reaction: oh, uhhh wellll, ok. Still messed up but at least the uke is not 7 anymore ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Final verdict: like how its super twisted and want to read more! Just hoping that seme is not into small children anymore and just love the uke. Uke is good, loved it, totally messed up, but still love it.
Nooooo soma, ur not ready yet! He's too high above you! Nooooooo
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Ugh, that's dumb souma for you (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜
Well i only wrote that comment because the manga shows that the #1 of the elite ten is really that strong.......so lets hope soma can keep up? I really don't want soma to work under him ( ̄∇ ̄")
Ikr ( ̄∇ ̄") idk if Soma can handle him ( ̄へ ̄)but yeah, let's hope (▰˘◡˘▰)