the story would have been salvageable if the seme’s character “development” was more fleshed out...i literally felt like throwing up with all his gaslighting and rape towards the uke...also the uke is so fucking dumb the author literally made him with no brain activity
oomf i finally caught up to the novel where ch40 happens and hong xiu's act of defending the emperor was described more brutally bye imma cry again
can you give me the link?
Yah! Its much more brutal in the novel
the writing of characters in this manhua is so terrible
the shadows have more personalities and development than every character combined lmao
idk where it went all wrong since it seemed good at the start but the writing became so horrible...
- it seemed that sage and berry wouldnt be at each other’s throats in the middle of the story like most cliches but that went up in flames when sage’s character got reduced to that mess...
- mandarin... THERAPY WHOMSTVE
- pear doing that to walnut... author didnt even bother to expound on wtvr future he mentioned to wally’s mom
- bruh we lost like character development w wally ever since he got together w berry like he seemed such an interesting character before but now he’s like as boring as a wall
- for berry.. i lowkey felt bad since she was getting manipulated the whole damn time but bruh berry im so sorry the author made u some dumbass mary sue
there are still more plot holes but i dont wanna waste time anymore on this ajdhdhhs
and finally knowing that the author is the same as the trashfire that is sadistic beauty... makes so much sense...
this author doesnt know what communication regardless if it hits them with a car
a yaoi with good plot, good art, and no rape? sign me TF up
it makes my heart cum when characters actually communicate and understand each other
i couldnt wait any longer so i bought it on tapas and bruh
i hope yall ready for these last few rides
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i was tryna hold back tears but when i read the afterword page i lost it