It seems like mangaka started adding to it after a few chapters, hence the style change from manga > webcomic.
It's drawn out, repetitive, one dimensional and basic. I'm not gonna say it's boring though, it's clearly a product of it's era; heavy shojo art style, stale character tropes, blatant homophobia from (mainly) female characters INCLUDING heaps of fluff, age old plot twists and shojo sex scenes.
It's like watching Twilight or The Vampire Diaries in modern day, yk what ur signing up for haha. Clearly if this genre from this era is your thing, this'll be another book for the log. If not, just pretend you're observing a piece of history.
IMO it's a comforting read when you know exactly what the playbook is gonna look like...
Cheers to whoever reads this somehow, happy 2025
When reading through the og non mature version, I don't remember people getting so upset about all the side stories. I'm sure there was some disappointment but goddammit it's not like the whole story isn't out already (on this site and all). If you're here its cause you just a horny mf, I don't wanna hear no damn complaining. I figured most people here would have finished it already.
"It's bad now" or "it's boring" is lazy, go to the other version and literally skip all the stuff you don't care about, though if you don't really have the patience for it, you should probably stop after S2
I'm just a little sad, I thought everyone was here for the sex scenes alone but I guess not and im just the weirdo fr T_T
I mean this whole damn series is unserious as hell. They're both nuts, one lives on hedonism alone while the other is delusional with crazy attachment issues. The only issue I have is the promise stuff, if alpha is gonna go crazy over a guy then it better be convincing! You and I have probably read this a million times over, "He doesn't judge me for who I am based on my status...!", but this one just didn't hit the same. And yeah omega is really unlikable (what hedonism does to an mf)
If you think this is a waste of good art, read their other stuff; I came from "You and I Can't Do This Anymore"
Hedonism and delusional certainly makes an interesting combo! I just don't think it was executed very well
Yeah I could not imagine trying to sleep with this guy, he is a fucking child! I feel like I'd be violating him if I were to try bro
bro I was legit sayin to myself before scrolling through the flashback like "nah i know this author I know this ain't happen fr yet "
Before the mature version was ever posted on here, it's always try to place where the sex scenes could've been. Never thought about doin it on the beach ig!!
Bros I haven't read this shit in like 2yrs+ or smt. I literally clicked into the update for the first time in forever cause I was so FLABBERGASTED to see them being happy in the cover art, like it's finally here and they look happy
Will probably find the time to binge, is it worth doing it all in one sitting or will it take Iike all day?
Like the freak or not, this was an interesting but weird read
Also I'm all for criticism, but man that comment is such an eyesore like get outta here man
if this isnt the most peak example of a slow burner, i dont know what is. people are hating on horus for being a shitty person, and i have to agree, but how is this not a part of complex character writing? i mean seth has literally commited war crimes but i dont see NO ONE complaining about him. but i get it, hes gotten a lot more development than horus (which makes him easier to sympathize with. DOES NOT VINDICATE HIM, do not make that mistake.)
im sorry the moment youve been waiting for was ruined by a flawed character that has had little development so far... ofc i am upset too. not a fan of horus being infatuated with whom hes idolized? simply go read something else, i dont wanna see your sunk cost bullshit. but youll keep coming back.
also? this is an extremely established theme at this point, i dont get why people are so dristraught? its not like that is all of a sudden going to change; its not like seth deserves it AT ALL POOR SOUL, but r4p3 is a recurring theme. happens in flashback s1, early s2 and here it is again.
personally gotta give it to the author for using the strange ass familial thing going on as a device for seth and especially horus. that unnerving feeling that tells me "this is so wrong" is what makes this so interesting for me
TL;DR
this is obviously a slow burner, slow the fuck down. r4p3/SA themes, idolization, familial relations? all in one? how is that not interesting? not fun or enjoyable to read, but interesting?