Emky's Topics (102)

As much as I agree that this is supposed to parallel what Leo was doing to JJ, it's too much. No prep whatsoever. And to be exact? It's not a direct parallel. In ch 1, JJ did not come when Leo left. He was fully hard when he wiped his dick. What could have happened in this ch, was just leave Leo not coming and wanting for more. Make an excuse that JJ has an appointment and needs to leave. That would be the exact revenge from ch 1 that would sense for the plot.

Maybe I've been here too long I am getting disensitised to all this.

Been there but I've come to a point that I don't hate characters for being an ass or assaulting characters, as long as the story is served properly. If the scene makes sense, no matter how deplorable it is, it is fine. I'm more upset when there's inconsistency with the writing.

You you are upset that JJ character became an asshole, tbh it doesn't bother me much considering the MC is still the bigger asshole. But hey it was fun bouncing thoughs.

Yeah because it wasn't gradual or consistent. He can be an asshole but make it make sense. He came from worrying about Leo every single time, took little steps forward asserting himself then boom, ramming no prep one chapter. If he just stopped at blow job from ch 14, he would still be an asshole but it's the same weight as ch 1, Leo being an ass. If Leo did something even more horrible, then sure make ch 15 happen but maybe further up the chapters not this early.

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