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I feel like it would be better if the original Sera saw the wrongness of her own actions and tried to fix it, patching things up on her own terms. She did shit, whether by emotional outburst or not, and her stepbrother has every right to be mad at her; her fiance, while unnecessarily cruel and cold, has always been logical(even if that makes him a bad person), and I want to see the actual Sera break the engagement off with him and take note of her emotional outburst see the actual Sera realize she isn't her father's child and emotionally toggle through it.
Just because she is hurt doesn't suddenly make her OK; it makes her an emotional villain, whether influenced or otherwise. I want to see og Sera's regret and make and actually learn to run things dealing with the female lead when she realized she wasn't just fucking crazy and she was in fact being antagonized. I want to see Sera deal with her own consequences, and I get it. Our girl who's in Sera's body is not prone to anything but the surface level,' Oh no, I affect them like that?' Regrets when, even then, she doesn't have to feel that way.
Everything would have FAR more emotional impact if this wasn't a reincarnation plot, like if Sera died and went back in time, or if she truly realized or felt that she fucked by hitting her stepbrother in the head with a wine bottle, or pulling a knife out in an argument, or threatening the people she works with like shit, or a build-up of everything, and if not by a reaction to noticing her violence she could change by feeling like she truly is alone when her fiance neglected her feelings for titles and images. She only has ever been truly vulnerable around her fiance.
Please, just please, this gives off the vibes of not having to feel bad for nobody else but the MC because she's literally not the body owner, so you are forced to root for her as she ignores everything emotionally impacting (not that I blame her, girlie was thrown into this mess, she's doing as she should, I just wish she wasn't thrown into this mess)