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I feel like the mc would annoy me in the near future. I dont likd how the first baby (commercial baby) was treated and how they dealt with it without mentioning so far. That peeves me. I had to scream every chapter that "that's just a baby?" Everytime I saw werid behavior to mc and any other young character thus far. His original dad and the actor just pisses me off for the whole cheating thing that I feel they are just pushing aside as a 'oh yeah!'. I rather see his original mother in that position attempting to help a baby instead of the dad (unless the mother beat on him or something). And I'm annoyed that everything Mc did before he died ended him as a baby in an acting career i rather him go back in time or something it feels unfulfilling (good on him for having decent parents though). I just feel something going to happen and its going to stay left unchecked or improperly dealt with and that pisses me off so bad so I refuse to keep up with it. (The writing style is rushed, the flow is werid, and I have my qualms with some of the charcters)