Ill be back in ten chapters, need to let this wall sit.
I saw the rating and comments, and was like, what could possibly be that bad? Like really I seen some fucked up stories with atleast 6 or 7 something ratings so I looked. And maneee, it is that bad. I shouldn't have read this.
Let's count off the the shit that got me.
1. Art style, I typically stomach stuff with a bad art style if the plot is good. And I've seen people do the same with terrible plots on top of terrible art. But this doesn't make up for it at all. (One chapter, I'm pretty sure his head was levitating by a straight line)
2. Shitty art style but they still jump straight into porn. Okay people rated worse shit higher, gotcha. I mostly phased past the sex scenes while singling out issues.
3. He looks like a fucking child but is 24 which was surprising but im sure that's the author trying not to get flagged. That is a fucking child there's no reason he should be that short in comparison. He looks like a preteen when the ML lifts him.
4. Didn't think it would be OUTRIGHT rape thought it be some werid pseudo incest shit after the wife was noted of. And I don't know what's worse. He was raped not once but twice than technically ever time after because he was brainwashed and tricked into doing those marriage papers.
5. That golf park shit i barely read, that blonde 'couple' was some fucking form of incest and statutory rape because you ain't telling me that boy isn't twelve and they aren't look alike.
6. The boys dick! I save this for last, because wtf? I finally noticed it in the last chapter after zooming through. It's four inches AT MOST, even blurred.
7. Again the penis, your not telling me that's not a fucking child because he sure isn't 24. (No offense to the small kings.)
The author is freaked out, and baby, you haven't seen the half of it. This looks like something some gacha heat kid would make.
Spoilers if you please, this seem so typical they way the ml is showing emotion is clear that they're id a misunderstanding somewhere that'll covertly pop at at the last minute, and babbby im not interested in waiting that long to feel some type of way about this
It's weird, so I suppose those who read it are weird as well. How heavily ya'll argue that there should be no outside factor in a sibling relationship is weird, especially when it interferes with happy futures. And it's off-putting how the love interests are hated on both sides, brother and sister as if the plot should only have one pair. Had nothing been said, he would have either been weak and clinging to his sister til he was old or strong and weird. I love sibling relationships, their stories of it are well written with actual sibling dynamics from time-traveling to world-crossing.
You can make a complex sibling realationsip thats even clingy without one or both of them having a complex. The knight's point of view makes sense. The actions between each character from an outside point of view seem strange and almost incestuous. You can base a well-written story on siblings without the characters having a life outside of their siblings. Perhaps it's because I'm not reading for entertainment, but interest in the ML despite his poorly set up story. I don't need EVERY single chapter to be about the character bonding when they're already bonded and happy and thriving, it just gets weird and after that point when they should actively be opening the world up and showing love interests and friends.
He didnt even let his bruises fully heal this shit I'd going to get worse I feel it
This would literally be a love L with the girls on either end and Cesare in the middle. The shit don't connect and let's keep it that way.
The media and cameras all up in people faces during certain instances piss me off. But I can't be too made because they literally paid they're way in.
Is she still in that fuck ass palace with that stupid title after everything she did. bc I low-key slide through this only reading important scenes?
I seriously don't know how this ended up in my reading list
This is irking me so bad every interaction is drawn out buy also somehow cuts short making short chapters with no background or understanding, each chapter ends off on me more annoyed I dont even care about the itimancy I just need someone with common sense. Mc is so fucking stupid it hurts I can't even feel bad for him because he deserve every 1/3rd of the hate and ml or whatever he is, i don't hate him I hate that his character is making the plot unbearable just change the POV or something. Sit down or plant together I'm tired of pure disgust x pure lust.
Smut solving issue is one of my major peep peeves in stories but at this point it's literally the only thing that can make this a functioning plot.
I feel like the mc would annoy me in the near future. I dont likd how the first baby (commercial baby) was treated and how they dealt with it without mentioning so far. That peeves me. I had to scream every chapter that "that's just a baby?" Everytime I saw werid behavior to mc and any other young character thus far. His original dad and the actor just pisses me off for the whole cheating thing that I feel they are just pushing aside as a 'oh yeah!'. I rather see his original mother in that position attempting to help a baby instead of the dad (unless the mother beat on him or something). And I'm annoyed that everything Mc did before he died ended him as a baby in an acting career i rather him go back in time or something it feels unfulfilling (good on him for having decent parents though). I just feel something going to happen and its going to stay left unchecked or improperly dealt with and that pisses me off so bad so I refuse to keep up with it. (The writing style is rushed, the flow is werid, and I have my qualms with some of the charcters)
Everyone is forcing the ML hate. Are most of you being held at gun point? He isn't my favorite, but he isn't all that unlikeable, especially when he's so obviously a key factor of the plot line actually being the plot line. And I most definitely can't hate him when he is very clearly part of the reason (part) that FL time-traveled and gave so much to her in his past life. Like are we saying fuck him for sticking with her through her literal worse possible instances. How it's sat up I honestly would be mad if they didn't end up together after the broken love past plotline. If you hate the ML, you just hate the plot of the story.
You all saying, they keep forcing him, and they should show more sister-brother bonds, the sibling things is kinda weird with how their relationship is displayed. But other than that, the plot is just weird; something isn't giving. It's because every single relationship is being shoved down our throats, even FL and her brother. And the FL is okay in a way that she's just ok(def not my top ten FLs but she isnt bad). I rather see the brother hanging around the knight and prince to get stronger and make something of himself instead of getting spontaneously strong(bc the fl isnt the female warrior type). It's just so annoying seeing every other comment saying they have issues with the ML, why are we surprised that he keeps popping up when he's on the cover.
Low key I'm only here for the ml at this point because it's definitely not for the plot.