Anyone else confused? One chapter the ML is like 'i never been in or felt love before but if I knew how it felt I'm pretty sure how I feel for your would be love.' Or basically 'I think I'm in love but tbh idk bc I never felt it before, but yeah I'm pretty sure.' And he says that TO HER FACE every other chapter. Kisses her gets jealous YALL THEY WHERE BLUSHING AND I QUOTE OFFICIALLY DATING.
Than bam next chapter is marriage contract, one of the rules being 'if we fall in love we have to end the relationp' like wtf? Did I skip over something? FL said explicitly that she didn't want to marry, now their engaged to be married for three months? Acting like they didn't practically confess there form of love to eachother and ML despite being open with his feelings accepted this?
I know there both knees deep I'm trauma but each 2 step forward their relationship takes another 10 steps backwards they fall. I know this suppose to be a slow burn but damn I just think the authors stalling while trying to keep us latched on so will be feed but still hungry. (I'm in the middle of dropping this idk anymore)
Yes you did skip over something. It said if we fall in love with another person while in the 3 month period then they’d terminate it. And dohee was mixing truth and lies to his father. They’re not getting married and even if they do I think they believed that within their 3 month contract the father will die anyways and they think what the father wants isn’t marriage for his son but it’s love. Since dohees condition about not marrying without love is in effect they just lied about that. But they will still convince him they’re in “love” for the inheritance. I kinda zoned out have way through writing this and I have no idea what else I wrote and I’m not rereading
I WANT REPRECUSSION! SO WHAT IF ML is.A fucking Manchild MC had hard-core trauma and it was down graded and 'helped' by r*pe. Not once did ML really apologize but MC did???? Everything is fucking played off on MC end. I don't give a fuck if ML cry or has shit going on he basically manipulated MC and kept it rolling, and dumb ass MC is just like 'maybe I do like him...?' Wtf? I stopped reading seriously half way through so I forgot everyone names just skimming through to see if there is any reprucussion for the shit ML did AND NONE!
Anyway why the hell are we going back and forth about who's cheating and who isn't. Do anyone not get the concept and complexity of the story! Are you choosingly skipping over words and phrases. Like 'he cheated'.. so? That's the literal point of half the story. Its a character debt moment but not the entire plot. He knows what he did she does too. Why are we talking about morale in a story like this? That's not the point!
I ain't the type to hate on art styles as an artist about everything is beautiful but please just move the eyes DOWN the face, just a little, center them, something. The face is unnecessary long with a slight shift of the eyes. Not saying make the overwhelmingly low and change the art style just a LITTLE. But the art is beautiful Idk why I'm complaining... JUST.
This makes me uncomfortable. He finds her attractive because she's mentally child like due to trauma? Maybe brunettes are his thing and her adorable personality put the bow on top?
At first it was okay, he's cool not attracted to her physically or romantically, because she was frail mentally childish didn't, more than likely all skin in bone. But than it got intimate. Perhaps if their was development to that point I'd think about it BUT NO , I'm assuming its just the badly written plot.
Yeah you know where I'm getting at. Hell no. I knew this was romance but let the girl get mentally stable first. Teach her better self respect. I get the timeline but wow. And I stand on this. She can't consent to anything if she has the mind of a child! That's the whole reason age consent is a thing, mentality. (And physical maturity is the reason why, but it's usually illegal for a teenager and adult too so where not going their)
Off the bat I just know. This is a harem. Probably the tag wasn't added or the establishment of it is actually showing. But this is a harem. I like all the female characters already (only if they stopped blushing. Brown haired maid excluded she cool if not a bit too jumpy).. I love the females even. But why is all his current tight-knit alley are girls. No butler. No friend. Trusted brother. (The father and father butler is shit they don't apply). No stronger assistance. I mean the plotline makes sense why. But after the green haired girl blushed I just knew, I was already getting the ick with the red haired girl blushing. (Given that they're 14 in crushes are normal, nothing against her just DAMN that's unnecessary. She could of just looked up to him or something discipline style. And I mean she did get annoying when following him but her personalities fine its the author fault for pushing it).
This is just telltale sighs, and then the Potioner. You already know she's about to end of liking or admiring him beforehand. You can't tell me this isn't a harem.
But Goddamn a good plot down the drain-- (somewhat good plot but it's way better than others)
At that point I'd just off myself and hope I woke up in my past life. It ain't even worth it she don't have anything going her way other then blowing off steam on her brother. She barely has hope for the future and she has to deal with EVERYONE using or against her. I mean EVERYONE no exception. Couldn't be me I'd be on the ledge of the castle by know getting someone to push me.
This mf single handily crafted the plot in every aspect possible bc he thought he can get esy power he's really a dumbass isn't he . Cruel gonna have a field day when he finally get to kill him and I'm here for it.