I ain't the type to hate on art styles as an artist about everything is beautiful but please just move the eyes DOWN the face, just a little, center them, something. The face is unnecessary long with a slight shift of the eyes. Not saying make the overwhelmingly low and change the art style just a LITTLE. But the art is beautiful Idk why I'm complaining... JUST.
i was a bit bothered about something but didn't know what, thank you for your comment!
This makes me uncomfortable. He finds her attractive because she's mentally child like due to trauma? Maybe brunettes are his thing and her adorable personality put the bow on top?
At first it was okay, he's cool not attracted to her physically or romantically, because she was frail mentally childish didn't, more than likely all skin in bone. But than it got intimate. Perhaps if their was development to that point I'd think about it BUT NO , I'm assuming its just the badly written plot.
Yeah you know where I'm getting at. Hell no. I knew this was romance but let the girl get mentally stable first. Teach her better self respect. I get the timeline but wow. And I stand on this. She can't consent to anything if she has the mind of a child! That's the whole reason age consent is a thing, mentality. (And physical maturity is the reason why, but it's usually illegal for a teenager and adult too so where not going their)
Off the bat I just know. This is a harem. Probably the tag wasn't added or the establishment of it is actually showing. But this is a harem. I like all the female characters already (only if they stopped blushing. Brown haired maid excluded she cool if not a bit too jumpy).. I love the females even. But why is all his current tight-knit alley are girls. No butler. No friend. Trusted brother. (The father and father butler is shit they don't apply). No stronger assistance. I mean the plotline makes sense why. But after the green haired girl blushed I just knew, I was already getting the ick with the red haired girl blushing. (Given that they're 14 in crushes are normal, nothing against her just DAMN that's unnecessary. She could of just looked up to him or something discipline style. And I mean she did get annoying when following him but her personalities fine its the author fault for pushing it).
This is just telltale sighs, and then the Potioner. You already know she's about to end of liking or admiring him beforehand. You can't tell me this isn't a harem.
But Goddamn a good plot down the drain-- (somewhat good plot but it's way better than others)
I read here that the novel had a 'harem' tag
At that point I'd just off myself and hope I woke up in my past life. It ain't even worth it she don't have anything going her way other then blowing off steam on her brother. She barely has hope for the future and she has to deal with EVERYONE using or against her. I mean EVERYONE no exception. Couldn't be me I'd be on the ledge of the castle by know getting someone to push me.
Sure fire way to end a marriage, just pretend to be mad
First chapter in immediately turned off of the whole story my heart is out if Yeonha. And the red haired girl while she gives off strong likable character vibe I don't like the way she's towards Yeonha dismissive and Apathetic. I'm not about to accept or more than likely not like how my boy Yeonha is treated and will most likely be used. I don't gaf about strong female characters If one of their main love interests is being used by them or if they are just a bad lover. It's annoying.
Look I'm not about to dig to dip but I don't think FL is treating this situation properly. Of course she went through shit of course alot happened but in the timeline he's a child, an abused neglected child that was raised around people who was suppose to raise him but didn't show proper love. Of course he'd cling of course he wouldn't know how to properly show his appreciation and she doesn't like him due to future memories of what this version of him could be. Which is fair since she went through horrible a relationship with that version of him. But while she's on her road to changing and not back down or being abused she is neglecting to properly communicate AGAIN. Last time understandable, this time it's different I mean yeah she saved him but because she saved him he wants to cling to her. He is an abused child. A CHILD. He's going to attach to the person that seemed to care the most. And he would take it hard if she properly told him that she didn't want gifts or to be around him and the extent she disliked his prescene and that she didn't want or need anything from him. In those exact words because how she explained herself in this chapter is a mess. Anyways sure he'd be sad but she'd got her point across, as long as her family us their to properly lead him she has nothing else to do. She really needs a leveled head when dealing with A child. I CANT NOT STRESS HIS AGE ENOUGH. and I mean the future him was basically a child too in mentality he got out of a abusive situation and got sent straight to war barely able to talk just to get married. Now am I saying he's right? Hell no, but I'm saying that perspective matter. ALOT
EXACTLY. I'm not saying Leoni is wrong, i understand her stance but it should also be remembered that the person she "hates" so much was the rutger that married her not a freaking ABUSED CHILD. He's literally a child who was not helped by ANYONE.. and the only person that helped him hates him so much and visually depicts it. Literally OSTRACIZES him. I hate her for that. My heart hurts for him. I hate that evryone is blantantly choosing to ignore leoni's fault when she's the one lashing out on the poor child he did NOT even commit.
I feel like her personality is a tad bit off for someone who's been through war, and not her not being cold or cruel or anything... it's just... idk, Its like she lacks something fundamental for her type of character, like mental maturity, or actual mental strenght and control.... it's like she was raised with wolves instead of around man while fighting in war.
Idk how to explain it but I enjoy the concept and the couple trope, so I'll let it slide for now.
Am I the only one who don't want Shuli to be with anyone? Nora I love the guy and hope him the best(and his father need to learn communication) but her being with anyone at all doesn't feel right! Look of course I want her to be happy in find love just not how the story is showing it. I don't want her to be with anyone like that.
.... and every last character in this story (perhaps excluding the twins but them too just in case) need therapy in every form.
well, i think romance is not really the focus of the story but i truly believe that shuli deserves to experience her own love story with someone who deserves her, and Nora is the best person for that. I say this because Shuli's first life was focused too much on the responsibility given to her. Now I want her to experience many things including being loved not just by a family but also by someone who is willing to be by her side and love her. Nora loved her during the first timeline and still fell for her on the second. Both of them deserves their happy ending which is why I find it quite difficult understanding what you said about how the story is showing the romance part.
Though I do agree with what you said about the characters needing therapy especially Shuli lol
I can see that point but I'm just not ready for the romance aspect, I was focused on the family part. Well I can see the point for romance but idk its not what I'm looking for. But I do see the reason for it, Shula needs someone like Nora who would unconditionally care for her. And I wouldn't mind it just don't preferr it. Well honestly as long as the end game isn't the prince or the eldest son (forgot his name for a bit) than I cam let it be.
Lol at first i thought it was just a wonky translation cuz I was speeding through the chapters for drama and interesting scenes. But is her last name STERN? and his mother was a stern? Are they're cousins or something? Is it just the translation?
they refer to the place they are from as stern!
Thanks for the clarification I was so confused