this girl is slow, so freaking slow, I don't even want to read this, I read seven chapters skipped to a few then read the last and she didn't get any sense of awareness or anything. I don't even think an actual thought-out plot is in place, just random shit the didn't even add development for real, it's like a fucking character insert fanfiction done wrong.
Why does bro have twenty different jobs and or how are he finding them so fast? from waiter, to band member, to store clerk. Each job somehow always conveniently leading to another interaction with the blonde, I even thought the plot changed when the band popped up.
I think I figured it out
1 bartender - fired because he punched that crusty old man I forgot his name
2 band member - I think just a side gig for until he found a new job
3 store clerk - his new job?
Ugh, I hate stupid ignorant characters who keep doing stupid shit because they're somehow ALSO delusional
Why the hell is everyone cheating in fuckung eachother!? And it's the same fucking group like expand on your bullshit or something! I wanna fucking like Adam but bro needs nobody not even sex he needs therapy and family, keep bro away from other guys he's fucking himself up with everyone else.
Idk, like ugh I thought this was wholesome, this is a open fuck u to the tags and cover and whoever picked it.
Omg someone tell him to wait a couple of years wtf! it's interesting but not when the vet is continuously in bad situations. People are going to start thinking he's a pedophile and when that happens, his clinic is going under, how does MC not see the issue in his actions? MY dude needs to let HIMSELf marinate until he's at least seventeen lil bro is 11, that's not even cute because even if they do wait the vet would be seen as a groomer, and if dude let it happen without believing the time travel bit, he would basically be a groomer. Because, oh, 'some delusional rich kid without real friends and a psycho brother thinks I'm his lover in the future, let's entertain this after a bit of yelling at him.' Yeah, that doesn't look good from an outside perspective, from his point of view he should feel like he's entertaining a mentally unwell kid.
They have no business being together fl and ml so many fucking red flags TO many, it wont end well at all and the may even die together its so unhealthy its unreal but if im honest Im here for that, i cool with that because i see it coming no what to expect and wanna see where it goes. but fl friend gotta be serious girl isn't taking her butt nowhere away from ml after all that happened and if she does ml gonna take his head off and fl if he he in that mood he gotta be stupid for thinking his attempt would end well on either end. Especially after his last try.
RETRIBUTION! RETRIBUTION! RETRIBUTION! where is my retribution, shit that's the only reason I read it through mostly skipping the faintest sign of rape bc that's this story pride flag. The ml needs to the burned alive, L backstory, L personality, L trauma my boy is just a sociopath, put him on a stack and let him grill!
Usually stories like this don't actually have a romantic flow, the author is literally trying romantize the main ship, you can't tell me otherwise it'll be one thing if this just porn but this shit is psychological with the MOTIVE of having the Mc and ml together in the end with no actual revenge arc. Where on the side story people! And bro is still with this man! Just stab him in his sleep or atleast piss in his food! Tbh I don't wish this on nobody but Ml DESERVES to be abused in his childhood, but either way he'd turn out the same if not a bit more mellow! I pray that the side story end with Mc killing him. MC is just going through his Stockholm syndrome faze he'd persevere and kill Ml (I'm want even be mad if they both die MC been through enough)
I seriously wish for the same. For the seme to be killed by the uke so that he can finally be free. Damn.. the 10 year gang members though... Shit. I feel like shit. It ain't even me but I feel like shit.
I don't want this man I want to protect this man, he's all the fl's I'll just beat up his mother and deal with his annoying fiance.
I lowkey just wanted her to be with Alex, I honestly don't think he'd take it that hard or care if she's not pink diamond he seems like the type to only care about compatability and honest personality. The only issue is that I'm pretty sure if he thinks someone is purposely misleading or lying to him he'd feel some type of way because his honesty policy.
Platinum is... okay, he had some eh moments, and I think that he's already in love with pink diamond so figuring out that someone else who he thought was pink diamond isn't than he'd feel some type of way. It's like... I don't think what he has is honest to God true love he knows who he wants and any alter in the image of the person he wants would set him off. He likes a light switch one flick and shit goes dark.
I don't trust owl guy, sorry. But as honesty and truth goes I think he's the most unbiased option for her and they fit.
i feel like i read this already. Hold on... lemme just check. Yep, here it goes.
https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/the_flower_dance_and_the_wind_song/
may not be the exact same but way to similar, its like reading that bs again.