I saw the rating and comments, and was like, what could possibly be that bad? Like really I seen some fucked up stories with atleast 6 or 7 something ratings so I looked. And maneee, it is that bad. I shouldn't have read this.
Let's count off the the shit that got me.
1. Art style, I typically stomach stuff with a bad art style if the plot is good. And I've seen people do the same with terrible plots on top of terrible art. But this doesn't make up for it at all. (One chapter, I'm pretty sure his head was levitating by a straight line)
2. Shitty art style but they still jump straight into porn. Okay people rated worse shit higher, gotcha. I mostly phased past the sex scenes while singling out issues.
3. He looks like a fucking child but is 24 which was surprising but im sure that's the author trying not to get flagged. That is a fucking child there's no reason he should be that short in comparison. He looks like a preteen when the ML lifts him.
4. Didn't think it would be OUTRIGHT rape thought it be some werid pseudo incest shit after the wife was noted of. And I don't know what's worse. He was raped not once but twice than technically ever time after because he was brainwashed and tricked into doing those marriage papers.
5. That golf park shit i barely read, that blonde 'couple' was some fucking form of incest and statutory rape because you ain't telling me that boy isn't twelve and they aren't look alike.
6. The boys dick! I save this for last, because wtf? I finally noticed it in the last chapter after zooming through. It's four inches AT MOST, even blurred.
7. Again the penis, your not telling me that's not a fucking child because he sure isn't 24. (No offense to the small kings.)
The author is freaked out, and baby, you haven't seen the half of it. This looks like something some gacha heat kid would make.
I actually thought he was a middle school child. I thought since apparently ml isn't in jail, mc would be like 20. Mc is 24 and ml is 44. In my opinion a 20 year age gap just sounds bad
Spoilers if you please, this seem so typical they way the ml is showing emotion is clear that they're id a misunderstanding somewhere that'll covertly pop at at the last minute, and babbby im not interested in waiting that long to feel some type of way about this
It's weird, so I suppose those who read it are weird as well. How heavily ya'll argue that there should be no outside factor in a sibling relationship is weird, especially when it interferes with happy futures. And it's off-putting how the love interests are hated on both sides, brother and sister as if the plot should only have one pair. Had nothing been said, he would have either been weak and clinging to his sister til he was old or strong and weird. I love sibling relationships, their stories of it are well written with actual sibling dynamics from time-traveling to world-crossing.
You can make a complex sibling realationsip thats even clingy without one or both of them having a complex. The knight's point of view makes sense. The actions between each character from an outside point of view seem strange and almost incestuous. You can base a well-written story on siblings without the characters having a life outside of their siblings. Perhaps it's because I'm not reading for entertainment, but interest in the ML despite his poorly set up story. I don't need EVERY single chapter to be about the character bonding when they're already bonded and happy and thriving, it just gets weird and after that point when they should actively be opening the world up and showing love interests and friends.
He didnt even let his bruises fully heal this shit I'd going to get worse I feel it
This would literally be a love L with the girls on either end and Cesare in the middle. The shit don't connect and let's keep it that way.
The media and cameras all up in people faces during certain instances piss me off. But I can't be too made because they literally paid they're way in.
Is she still in that fuck ass palace with that stupid title after everything she did. bc I low-key slide through this only reading important scenes?
Huh? Yeah, YOU'RE RIGHT. Her title is still the same
im dead ass gonna drop it cause now its just annoying.
Oh to be able to raise your younger self...
I wouldn't be as shitty as I am now
Yeah I'd be a better person
Ill be back in ten chapters, need to let this wall sit.