Jonathan should be the ML!! He has way more charisma and chemistry with the MC than the actual ML not to mention better looking in my opinion!
I think the ML is gonna end up like the ML in Can't Think Straight (at least I hope) he's already basically fallen for the MC he just doesn't know it yet. Even though he has a fuck boy mentality he still helps out the MC. I do hope we get a chasing ark from him though! Our precious baby deserves it!!
I really wish this story had started with her going on the adventure when she was still Aryn and bonding with all the characters. It makes things feel a little empty when we just get flashbacks and quick explanations to situations or characters that the reveals don't feel as fulfilling. Almost like being explained an inside joke, it's just not as funny if you weren't there to experience it first hand.
I'm so confused by the affection meter he has. It currently says his affection towards her is 24/800 and yet he already is basically in love with her. So what happens when it's at 800?
At 100% he's gonna go full Pinocchio and become a "real boy" isn't he?
Marriage counseling would really do these two a lot of good. Honestly, just communicating with each other would too but a good marriage counselor would help deal with his jealousy issues and help the two work through all their past misunderstandings. If onnnllyyy
"The story begins here" bitch, it's been 140 CHAPTERS! What do you mean it beings here?!
"The story begins here" It's been 140 CHAPTERS! The title of the st
Garam has some serious trauma around "straight" guys and while Jaehyuk has been trying as of late to be a boyfriend to Garam, he has said a lot of homophobic things to Garam in the past and also had used him as a "human dildo". It doesn't surprise me Garam hasn't truly accepted Jaehyuk's affections or let down all his walls. But I do think Garam should communicate a bit better with where he's at emotionally, even if he doesn't go fully into why right now, just a little something so Jaehyuk can understand some of his boundaries.
Communication is key
If she's supposed to die by the OG ML's hand because of the revival magic, why does she think she can have Nau kill her beforehand? Wouldn't he just not be able to?
She doesn't look chubby she just looks like a child honestly. She's cute but doesn't look more than 12. The story was okay but overall too fast and had very one note characters. The story idea was good but feels like it was supposed to be a one shot that got dragged out to 18 chapters.
At this point I'm just going to assume the proportions are a stylistic choice
Could have stopped at one very platonic kiss on the forehead...then it got weird..
Bro really got gaslit into thinking he could get pregnant, like what?
I actually kind of like that they didn't end up together (at least for now, maybe in the side stories they will) but the fact that even though she fell in love with him, she still stuck with her main goal of betraying him to escape. Sometimes manwhas derail once the mc falls in love but I'm glad this one didn't, because even if she did kill that piece of shit, she doesn't deserve to be in jail!
I kinda wish that Mamoru stood up to his friends when the one was clearly disrespecting Tsubaki to her and his face. Like c'mon man, that's not cool...