The Second Coming of Gluttony
I was wondering where did people get this kind of story ideas. About a game where it can turn your life upside down, it'll cost you, your life and ofcourse there is someone watching over you.
Omniscient Reader Viewpoint also got a similar jiz as this one, then I remembered. Its fucking Squid game, yall got it from there, so now I understand.
alright
Art 9/10, would be 10/10 if the artist wasn't obviously a male with some weird ahh fantasy, why do you keep drawing girls really weirdly, who tf leans forward and arch their back checking their phone.
Storytelling 7/10, u suck, I get it, easier to show then explain later, but u took too long before explaining, I'm confused for so long.
Story 8/10, pretty basic atp, but not bad, its good.
Characters 5/10, you fail at making me like anyone else but the mc.
Arcs? Idk the before paradise arc was good 8/10, but now as soon as he hit paradise, its boring, its just like any other mmorpg manhwas out there 6/10 bweh.
The lazy prince becomes a genius
33 (Dropped),
"I love my friends, I've never had friends growing up" mane, just give up, I don't know, pretty boring and basic, I gave it a chance, it disappointed me, thats about it.
To deny the route
Read : 1
Its cute and sweet, overly too sweet? Ii get it the male lead LOVES the MC, but thats about it, its refreshing, nothing new nothing special.
Kill the Villainess
An actual good isekai, holy shit, I like how the mc isn't all sweet and "I care about people" this was good, its dark, cute, wholesome, I feel bas for the crown prince but hes a jerk, reminded me of my ex ngl.
The ending was enjoyable, I liked how clear it is, I like the FL, she's not weak, the male lead in the other hand was lowkey weak, but that's his charm.
Secret Alliance
This was weird, unique but still weird,
characters 7/10, bland, I didn't expect much, didn't get much either.
story 4/10, eh a ok, its refreshing but thats about it, kinda pathetic.
art 3/10, do better? I get its an art style but its not an excuse to make some panels questionable
I've Become A Crow