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153 Season 1,

idk, characters 9/10, goodjob into making the characters likable, their powers (the good guys) aren't that unique, the villain's in the other hand, different story. They're quite likable, including the higher beings.

Art 9/10, pretty good, but the chapters are limiting themselves by forcing to use panels, it had to much potential to play around with art going out of the panels.

Story 5/10, ahh where do I start, the premise is interesting, the plot? pretty basic at this point, returning back in time, before gates yada yada, but mane do I have a problem with the mc, sure he's planning to collect all 50 S rankers, but so far he's just been playing around, trying to "trick" the system into helping him, its just.. the pacing.. is bad, the whole I love my brother, don't hurt him, and the whole S rankers always fighting but never ended up actually fighting.

I get it bro, its an action manhwa but I'm pretty sure we don't need to drag fight scenes into multiple chapters, why do we need him fight the jellyfish twice for example, if he's gonna cheat and win anyways? he asked the system to help him with that, lazy writing ik he had to meet the system one day or another, but making the other guy triple S yada yada, bro lol.

ranking system 3/10, assss, I agree from F to A rank, but then S, SS, SSS, Legendary? that's another case of lazy writing, the writer doesn't care about the world building as much as I thought (at least for the first season).

the Netflix series is amazing, the art on this is ehh. Ig every cultivation manhua is like this.

Story 9/10, this is what I mean a good storybuilding, the writers know what kind of world it is, it cares about the past, present and future. A good writer must know the world settings. The different arcs are very nice too, smooth, anyway its good.

8/10, art is very pretty, but can I see what's happening most of the times? No.

9/10 characters, good job into caring what i wrote.