The Second Coming of Gluttony
I was wondering where did people get this kind of story ideas. About a game where it can turn your life upside down, it'll cost you, your life and ofcourse there is someone watching over you.
Omniscient Reader Viewpoint also got a similar jiz as this one, then I remembered. Its fucking Squid game, yall got it from there, so now I understand.
alright
Art 9/10, would be 10/10 if the artist wasn't obviously a male with some weird ahh fantasy, why do you keep drawing girls really weirdly, who tf leans forward and arch their back checking their phone.
Storytelling 7/10, u suck, I get it, easier to show then explain later, but u took too long before explaining, I'm confused for so long.
Story 8/10, pretty basic atp, but not bad, its good.
Characters 5/10, you fail at making me like anyone else but the mc.
Arcs? Idk the before paradise arc was good 8/10, but now as soon as he hit paradise, its boring, its just like any other mmorpg manhwas out there 6/10 bweh.
Kill the Villainess
An actual good isekai, holy shit, I like how the mc isn't all sweet and "I care about people" this was good, its dark, cute, wholesome, I feel bas for the crown prince but hes a jerk, reminded me of my ex ngl
I've Become A Crow