Whatisdis's Manga

I was wondering where did people get this kind of story ideas. About a game where it can turn your life upside down, it'll cost you, your life and ofcourse there is someone watching over you.

Omniscient Reader Viewpoint also got a similar jiz as this one, then I remembered. Its fucking Squid game, yall got it from there, so now I understand.

alright

Art 9/10, would be 10/10 if the artist wasn't obviously a male with some weird ahh fantasy, why do you keep drawing girls really weirdly, who tf leans forward and arch their back checking their phone.

Storytelling 7/10, u suck, I get it, easier to show then explain later, but u took too long before explaining, I'm confused for so long.

Story 8/10, pretty basic atp, but not bad, its good.

Characters 5/10, you fail at making me like anyone else but the mc.

Arcs? Idk the before paradise arc was good 8/10, but now as soon as he hit paradise, its boring, its just like any other mmorpg manhwas out there 6/10 bweh.

kinda slow.

the Netflix series is amazing, the art on this is ehh. Iv every cultivation manhua is like this