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Just re-read because I remembered I really fucked with the beginning of the story, but as it went on it just feels so evident the author got confused/troubled on what direction to take & had problems balancing the actual plot while also developing the romance, ESPECIALLY AFTER SEASON 2.
Not to say there are a plot holes necessarily, BUT I feel like there things that could’ve been developed better because everything just felt rushed and jammed in efforts of completing this in only 3 seasons. Honesty, I def think this would’ve been much better with longer seasons or a fourth one at that.
YKW Actually, (and call me crazy if this seems outlandish but) the author should’ve focused more on the romantic development and less on the outside conflicts with the bummy gangster and that one weird jealous co-star because by the time we got to the end and the ultimate resolution for the story I (personally) was just like “????” Cuz to me, if the romance was intended to be like THE finale and ending why not gear the story’s focus more toward that instead.
okay that was my ted talk.