beta
well that was just ghetto.
why make your debut smut scene this bs, there are literally so many ways to reinforce the characterization of a crazy character without having rape. Not only was the whole smut scene just obviously rushed but it just straight up ruined the whole thing (for me). I just don’t get how we can have stories like Red Mansion do this perfectly well and have unhinged semes without rape and still get THIS…
I really do expect too much