had a lot of potential. and was really funny in some parts. but that's about it. even if I don't touch on the lack of consent (since the first chapter) and the sex sequence (which was way too fast and way too uncomfortable to read),, I was hoping to see more of stuff like, Tomoru's work life, how he got there, what he intends to work on next, etc. would also like for Ritsu to be a more developed character, cause we know near nothing about him.
hm,, if you can't make a short story feel complete,, then don't?? add more chapters or don't add stuff that'll never get explained or explored??
the mom made me want to gag,,, but the part where the white haired alpha says next time he'll be the one pregnant made me "YEEEEEES"
I'm so happy with how this ended. in numerous stories you never get to see them talk to their families (and friends),, nor about how they want to tackle their future together. I'm really satisfied :)
this was cuuute. but I really wanted a separate more developed story for the second couple waaah
quite cute ! but there's nothing that really makes it stand out.
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also, would have loved it if there were more scenes of them dating,,
extremely wholesome.
even with the age gap, you understand why they want to be together. still,, idk why the author just didn't make gakuto a college student instead,,,, the story wouldn't change that much, so I don't know w h y,,,,, just that, would have made it so much better,,,
SO REFRESHING. SO DUMB. SO ADORABLE. I really liked this one waaah idiot+idiot is so good
very very cute and funny eheh,, (I don't know why the 5th chapter is about other people tho,, i don't care about them bro- wanted more of the mains)
forced myself to finish this cause I wanted to know if they'd have a nice development and talk about all the forced sex and how that's not okay,, but nope. it just kept happening till the end. the blond one was cute tho,,,, (also,, do these authors even know switch people exist??)
BTW. if you want to make a fucked up story, that's totally fine ! just stop brushing it off with "it's love" cause it's not.
this is an example of too much on a plate. there are too many story points that just appear out of nowhere just to never be explained afterwards. even though they eventually became quite a cute "couple"(?), their story was muddy and confusing.
a lot of potential that ended up not being used. also, the fact that they don't care how the fox feels and haven't even given him a name like,, okay.
this was so nice. and the fact it was better developed than the story with the fox, made me enjoy reading it.
(it was also interesting how different his wolf possession and the fox possession of akiha were.)
this was surprisingly SO GOOD. and the ending drawing of them sleeping together in their true forms really made me feel things aaaah. so good.
everything from the characters to the whole story, felt so real. this was so good. would love for it to have some extras too ngl,,
much better than I thought it would be. would have loved to see more, especially with them dating, since all they need to get healthier with time and to keep trying, (especially since one of the characters has something like antisocial personality disorder (which I find, is a nice change of pace, for an explanation for why he does what he does). STILL. I think it's a story that deserves/needs to be more explored.
this is a gem I'm always happy to reread. perfect comedy with amazing characters and relationships. I love them. I love the show. I just care about them so much waaah-