had a lot of potential. and was really funny in some parts. but that's about it. even if I don't touch on the lack of consent (since the first chapter) and the sex sequence (which was way too fast and way too uncomfortable to read),, I was hoping to see more of stuff like, Tomoru's work life, how he got there, what he intends to work on next, etc. would also like for Ritsu to be a more developed character, cause we know near nothing about him.
(note: ends on chapter 80,, the other two are just flashbacks (to chapter 62 I think) it's better to read them at that time).
I REALLY ENJOYED THIS ONE SO MUCH. MADE ME CRY, GIGGLE AND QUESTION EVERYTHING ahahshs
I know they're fictional,, but I wish them the best
hm,, if you can't make a short story feel complete,, then don't?? add more chapters or don't add stuff that'll never get explained or explored??
the mom made me want to gag,,, but the part where the white haired alpha says next time he'll be the one pregnant made me "YEEEEEES"
I'm so happy with how this ended. in numerous stories you never get to see them talk to their families (and friends),, nor about how they want to tackle their future together. I'm really satisfied :)
this was cuuute. but I really wanted a separate more developed story for the second couple waaah
I read this while it was ongoing and I remember being really into it. then suddenly it was over. but it was still a yes for me.