the plot point with the stalker client seemed a bit forced and like it appeared out of nowhere, since I don't remember he ever appearing in the first chapter(s) (which would have been important to happen, if it was supposed to have impact. even more since it was the only actual conflict,, plus it got resolved too quickly and suddenly.)
I also think it was a weird choice for it to be a misunderstanding "cheating" plot,, even more since there was so much more they could have done with the fact one of the members of the couple literally belongs to a yakuza family,,, which, unfortunately, doesn't matter at all to the story???
it just felt constantly like the author wasn't sure what to write.
it's okay, it was still fun and they're very cute,,, it just could be a lot better and that saddens me.
HOPE there's eventually a volume 2 that makes this story actually shine,, cause it desperately needs it ,,,,
didn't expect it to be so good,, two broken people scared of love but still wanting to be together in some way (I can relate, especially to ryo),, the character development is so good,,
side note but, I'm really glad this was well written cause not gonna lie, it could have gone bad at any moment with some rape between them or something like that- so I'm glad it wasn't the case.
i love how they fixed the misunderstandings, it's like what really happen in real life
yesyes exactly. it also wasn't forced nor did it feel like it. plus, their fears were valid af.
a lot of potential wasted on whatever this is.
there's quite a few interesting things (related to the dead and so on) ,, but other than that ?? this is such trash??? the relationship? disgusting. the plot? confusing as hell. idk what I just read,,
desperately need more WAAAH-,, I'd really love to see more of them. but apart from that, this was so entertaining and cute ! just really wish we could see how their relationship would go,,,, sad
was a nice one, even though the ex should have had a much harder time. I'm sad it ended so quickly. I wish we could see them slowly understand how to be together and everything else,,, it could have been so fun. unfortunately it felt a bit unfinished,, wanted to see at least how their families would find out etc,, I really wanted more,,,,,
can't believe the first story isn't a full volume and just ends like that,, it was so interesting and full of potential,,,
the second one too,, why aren't these separate volumes,,, they have so much potential,,,
the third one is not great, even though there was also some potential for it to be at least nice,, it looks even worse after reading the first two stories, that were so full. I'll pretend it's better or that it doesn't exist,
my favorite is I think the second one,, and I'm happy we at least got some mini comic panels about those two (like the parents thinking they were together already? so good)
THIS WAS SO DUMB AHAHAH. quite funny and extremely unserious. but they actually make a super cute couple eheh~ definitely read it if you're looking to have a weird and fun time pff.
depending on how this develops it can be really good,, like if the black haired dude became obsessed with the main ahshz,, toxic relationships sometimes can be fun to read about,,, wish they updated this
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I read the the rest in spanish since that's all I could find (good thing I'm portuguese and can understand it ahah),, and it turned out quite cute actually!
it's just as silly as it looks, so if you're looking for a few giggles and not that many thoughts then sure~ give it a try.
(but also,, I'm glad they got character development and in addition, became happier. good for them)
it's one of those that could have gone on and on and I wouldn't mind. just reread it after some years and I can say that I understand why it was on my favorites list ahahah.
it's very adorable, and the characters are all really well written,,
hmm I guess there's just two things that made me go like "damn, really,," (they're not bad btw !). one is that, there's a lot of little time skips and such in the story making some interactions that I really wanted to see, not happen,, such as game shows, interviews, more concerts (and other more personal situations),, I understand they weren't needed but,, I still wanted to see them
the other one is in regards of the ending! I think it's really cute and love them a lot (they could talk about adoption being an option too, but whatever),, however, a last chapter, where everyone appeared? like one of those massive shows with multiple groups, or even an award ceremony? so we could see them all interacting together "one last time", and maybe add some appearances of characters that just disappeared completely (which like- I understand the twins weren't important anymore but c'mon,,,) ,,,
oh- just to add,, I think not knowing their future is fine,, even though I wanted to see more,,, but imagine a huge timeskip, where they're old and wrinkly and happy