beta
it's porn with a little bit of plot but that's it. for what it is, it's fine. could be a lot better, (even if we were to go the slut route) but heh.
(there's also a lot of rape and assault in this, especially during the first time he does it with someone so, you know,,)
starts off with abuse and rape, and the seme just tells him to tough it up after the experience and starts sexually assaulting him as well... I can't say I have the capacity to care where this is going at the moment.
I'll try again in the future but heeeh,,,