beta
cute and simple, but the characters are definitely not used to their potential. it's literally called the loser and the airhead, but it's almost irrelevant (the airhead part continues, but the loser??). it just felt like there could be MORE. much much more. not to mention the wrong tags, but someone pointed out that yoshiro said thank god he wasn't a virgin, and I also got confused at that. the fact they didn't even explain like ???? when, why, with who??? what ?
having ocs of my own that are like the dumb and dumber troupe, I just feel like the author could've have explored their story way more.
it was still quite cute and funny enough in some scenes, but heh.
p.s.: if he's supposed to be a loser because of his feelings only then like- okay, sure.
absolutely adorable. iconic even. bittersweet because of all the goodbyes too,,
I wish we could see them get confused with their world after being away for so long. like, in class or with the family or friends. I just wanted more, cause it's so good tbh.