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it's cute on the whole, and me personally, I love delinquent ukes,, but their dynamic didn't develop enough, especially on satomi's end. they did talk a bit, but on the whole, their relationship stayed unbalanced for too long,,, also? no one really understands how he developed his feelings so quickly. plus, as someone said, the slurs that come out of nowhere?? completely unprovoked?? wtf.
the scene at the end with the bear made me tear up actually.
this is super cute, and their dynamic is super interesting to follow. plus it's so funny, like- not the birds always being on top of him ahdjfkfk
(do need to read more carefully since I was in a hurry.)