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i liked it but honestly everything was such a rush right at the end or even after char tried to ran away the second time
i really like the psychological aspect, even though its fucked up if you see it in a normal, its great how the author used different manipulation tactics here
after that chap it lowkey predictable how they though tbh but its aight ig
and the fight between the deva was so anticlimactic there was a build up then boom dead, i’d honestly like to more about the deva and why they even turned against ehirite now we know because they were sick being the shadow, i wanna know about how they were even able to be able to be up to par with eva, know more about kihu esp how he was the successful experiment
i would like to know more about that sliver past of kiera and dylan interaction where he said he wanted the sword but was able to suppress his feeling
did char lose her divine powers after the fight?
why the fuck were fairies/ancient beings so sus it was so brief their reason of hiding.
i wanna know more about pane and his back story, did they forget that pane is basically circulating mana around his body to be able to move, he’s quite powerful but how.
will that one maid ever have her successful perfume business
chars mum and dad, what happened after she shouted at him? did she leave on her own will, pushes him out out of the dream?
did the ronans ever proceeded through with the disownment, since they regret treating char like that (law of detachment fr)
also the groomer allegations is actually wild? char is not a groomer, she transgressed only to have a mind of revenge, yes it was bad that she manipulated dylan but thats how you plan something? also she did not live as a human during those 400 years, she lived as a sword and her daily life was mental torture, killing, murders, corruption anything of the negative, she never even had a life to begin with. she never had once experience life of indulgence during then, i like to think that she is still that same age before she was turned into kiera, like that was her preservation of herself her human self. 400years as a sword, she only lived through what she called hell, but she also gained knowledge given that she was the emperors weapon meaning she was always by their side and to rule is to know. She was already a smart child so it was common sense that she’d absorb that knowledge.
anyways she is NOT a groomer pls.
anyways more on kihu please. need his happy ending. omg i forgot since kihu always loved char, how so? was it because of her beauty, bc looking at it 99.9% of everyone in her past life ignored her bc the duchy ignored her, so i’m interested how he likes her THAT much. Like I always thought he liked her because of infatuation and he felt bad and obviously he’s a really kind person but damn.
And I honestly, I aint tryna be rude but I don’t see Dylan or Char being good parents like they’re not gon be abusive but given their dynamic… but then again theyre lowk both craycray
I feel like their child is gonna be like another one of those emotionless one of a lifetime genius,, idk just my speculation
Also what about that kid at the orphanage? Why did she know about ehirite, the fairy scent, being scared of char and dylan.
Anyways please let me know if they’re already been answered in the chapters and I prolly forgot or my mind thought otherwise.