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mutal unrequited love (they're very smart idiots).

I SAID WHAT I SAID

Everything that sucks:
- author makes it hard to suspend belief bc they try to justify everything in "realistic " terms
-plot is derailed
-writing quality drops
-becomes a story about her fcking idol debut or whatever
-what's with the whale??
-she completely forgets about the terrible trauma her family deals with
-ML is one dimensional
-FL is one dimensional
-every single character is one dimensional
-art quality also drops lmao fight me it's true
-Mary Sue FL (but not in a fun way)
-genre of the work is all over the place; it looses strength in particular aspects because it doesn't have any genre to anchor itself in besides it seeming like a self-indulgent work

i'm not talking about 2nd ML syndrome,i'm talking true hate for the ML rn. He is a despicable partner and he comes from an even more horrible family. truly wish for the FL to leave him,and him not get an redemption.
goddamn i hate him (๑•ㅂ•)و✧

ヾ(❀♡◡♡)ﾉ~ I SIMP

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BOY DO I HATE THE SAINTESS SO MUCH. AHHHHH I WANNA FIGHT (๑•ㅂ•)و✧

Ngl I like her so much because I see myself in her. If I was ever reincarnated into a novel,I really think I'd act like her. Fearful, somewhat clumsy, and just trying to survive. She's obviously kind and shy,so nothing she does is out of the ordinary for an ordinary girl. I think if her personality suddenly changed to that of an extroverted and cunning women,I'd be a little sad.

I WILL SELL MY SOUL FOR ONE OF THEM. ENISHA DO YOU NEED A SISTER

I can not handle slow builds /reveals of things,but this story has been worth it so far. The FL is a little annoying,but I think it's more so due to circumstance rather than poor writing. I can't wait for future updates!(⌒▽⌒)