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This is really cute and wholesome. However… something about it makes it hard to follow the story. And I am confused about the timeline sometimes. And it was difficult for me to distinguish the characters at one point Don’t take this the wrong way though bc I do love their relationship. And this is a good story! So if you read the summary and other comments and it sounds interesting, I would definitely recommend giving it a read!!
I wanted to like this bc the plot didn’t seems so bad and the art is amazing but…
It was really difficult for me to feel immersed in the story. I tried really hard to like the uke but he was irritating. I wanted him to solve something himself but he kept making bad decisions and getting into trouble. He needed the seme’s help every time and had the attitude of a 12 year old. Starting from the beginning when he couldn’t ACT as his boyfriend?! That had me pissed off and it didn’t get better. Also, I was scrolling past every sex scene as it made me uncomfortable. Why did it feel like r*pe every time? Not once did it seem like the uke enjoyed it and the seme never stopped! I didn’t understand the strong emotions they claimed to have for one another. I wish I could I appreciate this more, but honestly I was just reading to get through it.