The timeline is so all over the place - if I have to go back and reread things to try and cement the order of what’s happening in my mind then you’re doing a bad writing job :/
Back when I was a kid, jp manga always did this thing where they colored the outside of all panels in black if it's a flashback so there were no confusion. Wish that is more common though I get different artists want to make different artistic choices.
The timeline is so all over the place - if I have to go back and reread things to try and cement the order of what’s happening in my mind then you’re doing a bad writing job :/
Back when I was a kid, jp manga always did this thing where they colored the outside of all panels in black if it's a flashback so there were no confusion. Wish that is more common though I get different artists want to make different artistic choices.