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The 1st chapter looks so Ai written lol.
The start was soo weird and random, like the author started adding all kinds of tropes but stopped halfway. There's no connection or coherence between the two chapters, either.
1st chapter was completely pointless somehow, too. The seme being an annoying bitch right from the start with literally no info was so dumb and pointless
And the way the characters are acting...
Ho boy... (￣∇￣")