
This needs way more than 6 chapters. It is a really intriguing story but sadly it gets limited by the little amount of time it can build itself up, thus not being able to be fleshed out more which this typa story deffo needs
Also not a lot of people are talking about how mc is also just an absolutely awful person like the guy didn't seem to have a problem with getting a father killed (who yes is horrible too but mc didn't even know nor care abt that) and slapping that father's child in the face right afterwards, the guy has probably done some actual horrible shit. And he doesn't seem to have changed or even want to change into a better person either. I fw his characterizarion such a shame it's kinda wasted here
But yeah I read it as a what comes around goes around story where both are absolutely awful people.

Some of you all see a character inconvenience the main character/couple and straight up hating them to the point of wanting them dead not even considering any complexity the story might have given them
This is both about blondie, who yes does do a ton of stupid crap but considering his circumstances and from a writing perspective it make sense and abt the villain couple which like have so much potential for their own spin off story I am not even joking. I enjoyed their characters tremendously I cannot believe so many people here want them dead lol. I realize they are trying to kill mc but these bitches act like cartoon villains with more braincells, they are way too fun to just die plz
It's fine to dislike a character, just kinda find it sad some here either don't realize why they act the way they do or try to get invested in any way in them because they aren't the main characters which kinda sucks but oh well ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

Ikr? it's like they didn't bother to get in into the story much. Like we get it, he's done a lot of stupid shit, but it's like they don't even bother trying to understand his circumstances and just turns a blind eye into his story. I'm sorry but their the kind of people that would blame someone solely because of one mistake instead of looking into more of the story.

I'm mixed on how I feel about this story because on one hand it has a very interesting and good potrayal of an avoidant attachment style (and also probably autistic lol) person and them slowly starting to be able to have a more secure attachment style, I'd love to read more stories exploring things like that
On the other hand, GOD IT IS GENIUNLY PAINFUL TO READ. Like reading the last 15 or so chapters just made me feel physical pain because these characters cannot clear cut communicate if their life depended on it. Which listen in this case it's kinda more realistic but godsdamn I was suffering hard <3

Just re-read it and gosh I love queer psychological thriller stories
It does not try to romanticise Oda and his actions towards Katou at all, it's all shown like a nightmare come true towards Katou
I wish this hadn't been a one-shot because I feel it could have been a geniune masterpiece had we been shown a slower descent into madness with both these characters.
Neithertheless, it is a very unique story and I'm still glad it exists
Is the author by chance clinically insane
Not meant as an insult, I need to know how the hell their mind works to come up with everything happening within this story <3
Who knows ' -')r
they're just a very creative individual