The concept was pretty good but God is this so badly written :)
Badly written? How so?
I agreeeee totally like i started reading it just for a change of scenery but it didn't expect such a plot i thought it's gonna be like a everyday manhua with typical plot it was actually soo interesting the writing sucksss
The pacing isn't good, you jump from plot to smut to filler information in favor of expositions. The manipulation reveal was lackluster and felt more like a plot device, while the chemistry and characterization feels charming, it's still audibly daft considering most of their dialogue consists of 'I can't do X cause of Y'
That doesn't make it a bad media however, The series has its merits and flaws just as how formal literature isn't the cup of tea of many. It's still valid to critique the story for setting up plot lines like 'He's not my actual grandfather' or 'I'm now friends with a vassal' only to use those possible interesting character study as just a plot device to drive the narrative further.
Aka Grandpa > Goes to the North > Whoa, Demons I have to go there now
Or Brown Haired Vassal > You guys are cool join my club > Literally just turns into someone you just send a pamphlet to.
The tournament > Let's have a promise > Nvm we fucked already > Wyverns
Right! The first few chapters were quite good but then everything got confusing like the author had no idea how to actually "grow" the plot , like they only had snippets of it.
This!!
Yeah I agree the concept looked really promising tho but yeah the reveal was lowkey disappointing
I hope she doesn't forgive that sperm donor (atleast easily). It really makes me angry when sh*t fathers are redeemed by simply stating that they are "awkward and shy", fck that. The child is mentally and physically abused and neglected and you are still "awkward and shy" for more than a decade, yeah right!
And I hate it how she said "I didn't understand him either" , how will a literal child understand her sperm donor if they don't even have a single proper conversation and why the hell do you even need to understand him!? It's nice and good in a fairy tale but not in real life, such parents leave a different kind of mental scar in the kids.
Thank god I read the last chp and comments before picking it up again. What a sh*t ending.
Does anyone have any idea how many more chapters till its over??
And my god! How much I hate that Kahlid b@stard! I could feel my blood boiling, there one other existence I hate as much, the antagonist of Unholy Blood. I was so so so annoyed throughout that I was lashing out on my family, I am going to comeback after it's done.
I haven't read this yet, who's the ml?? Please tell me he's not the killer.
Nope it's not him, enjoy this one is pretty good!!
I so feel you. I hate Khalid so much and every time he is in a chapter he just makes me hate him more.
Thanks, I will.
Right! And his logic!!! God, I absolutely adore the fact that he isn't the ML.
Ok this is what we needed!!
I absolutely love this already.
I would like to think that at the end, Carsein fell in love with someone who actually has a brain and appreciates him passionately and MC gets cheated on again. Because more than the shifty ML, I find the fact that MC actually after all that growth and drama chose shit again, so much more offending. All my love was wasted, I fcking hate her.
Well you can use the prespective of mc collected all the things she couldn't have in first life by cheating her way through life and stealing other people success , so technically it is a win for mc
If dame Iona ( from this marriage will succeed) was her superior she would have run laps until she keels over… given all the studying she did in the last life she is hella dumb…she felt offended that jiuen didn’t follow etiquette despite being taught while she follows it conditionally with the prince and nobility…this hypocrite… if you are going to talk big to the god saying you will reject them i would expect you to show more dedication and desperation than this…. This MC is a disgrace to other regress MCs （￣へ￣）
No one needs to answer that Sh*t you are the one that caused all this tragedy you are the instigator! Trashta acts verymuch led to her downfall but with a little bit of "proper kindness and attention " she would have lived a much happier and fulfilling life.
I heard a japanese ver was released, anyone has any idea where to read it??
I want to know too...