The Mc personality is too dull they tried to make her look cool and cold/nonchalant but its really affecting the tone of the story also its Too Dull imo
i mean considering what she went through in her past 7 lives it's pretty understandable ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Yes she's boring no expression no emotion and it makes every action she does in this story lifeless and dull. They just tried to hard to make her cold and unbothered and its just not giving right now.
I mean I guess realistically.. but as far as writing an exciting fantasy story goes???
yeaa ngl i agree with u, i wont be expecting her to be all sweet n cheerful but girl at least smile a bit even just a little laugh is acceptable
She doesn't even have to be gleeful... my girl shows no emotion she dont even be angry just dead inside bro you can argue about the realistics of whatever but from like surface level writing skills from reader and author pov its boring no one expects this from a exciting fantasy romanced genred story the author tried too hard to make mc this cool cold protagonist who doesn't care and unfortunately any reader below surface level will see how it affects tone of story the mc has no depth or character or charm to her. Its very hard to get attached to her which is horrible for writer... dont really feel anything for her except sympathy cant even get excited for her accomplishments or satisfied at her face slapping because she isn't .....
She did smile and does frown sometimes
What else is she supposed to do I would be dead inside too if my family was literally shit, her personality will clearly grow as the story goes on of course I mean she still at that shitty place u cant really expect to see smiles flying everywhere at the moment
I literally said she doesn't have to be happy ... lmao I wouldn't expect that would her backstory.. anyway!
Oh! guess I missed the tone of story still dull
That what do expect from her than ? ( +plus if I made it seem like u said u wanted her to be happy didn’t mean that whatsoever if my spelling says that my bad )
Anyway! I dont really understand why you guys try so hard to counter opinions that don't align with yours I said what I said and that just how I feel shes too dull her coldness seems forced by the author and its affecting the tone of the story everything she does has no emotions to it she's saves a dying kid... its just like ok.. she almost kills her dad its just like ok... I want a personality for any mc not being able to get attached to an mc is horrible for author.
I was literally just asking a question not counter your opinion whatsoever but whatever you say
This! I truly agree with this one
Maybe I missed something...mm mm yall are NOT about to cover up the emotional abuse this lady caused i dont care if it was a shitty misunderstanding for his benefit whatever the boring tropes authors use to excuse or downplay this and then wonder why nobody takes there stories serious especially Yaoi if you're going to introduce controversial or serious topics into your story ,elaborate on it and give it a proper conclusion not white washing.
No forreal did I miss something because why this bitch getting so much praise and when did she become selfless
U should read the previous chaps.
I think we can all agree that its so much better that this story was written in the princes POV because if it was written in Bertia.... it would just be agonizing im sorry
Absolutely. Love the girl, but no.
Also a great study on how changing perspective/who the narrator is can change the mood or genre of the story being told.
everything will be in chaos if the story was viewed in her POV. I'm sure we would have to read like 2 long paragraphs of her *thinking* cause of how energetic she is XDDD
Lmao ever since I found our about the incest everything the Duke does annoys me like girl let him relax... for a day at least... and btw no one cares if you like the fetish incest part we all have our own tastes and opinions dont call us sensitive because we aint call you weird yet
Only reason I'm still reading is for the smut tbh the duke is pretty so... i have not taken the storyline serious yet because most of it is clouded by sex all we know is about a son and a incest fight between siblings
First of all, gross... and I hope their relationship dynamics doesn't stay this way the whole comic and the Duke changes and their relationship become more of a mutual thing then a power imbalance slave master kind of relationship
They do :)
The uke in the second story deserves so much better what is up with authors writing trash like this?
Ok but spoilers about the fake ass blonde haired uncle??
I think someone said he has a mistress somewhere?
Teaaa.... hope the boys are ok and they don't become villafied in the story like their dad and they live happy with their mom and I hope he getting castrated.
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Hates the family / feels inferior. But get this married her because of the family’s benefits. Even though he had a childhood girlfriend ig. So he marries the aunt but is still with the girl and even got her a house . HE ALSO STOLE HIS WIFES PRIZED BRACELET FROM HER MOM AND GAVE IT TO THE MISTRESS. I think he’s embezzling money because he manages the family’s funds . They get divorced . He abandons his kids / doesn’t fight for them . But he didn’t deserve them anyways. Their revenge happens when at a party it is revealed that the mistress has the bracket and the grandpa is very mad . They go to jail !!!(づ￣ ³￣)づ
Thank youuu cant wait for the revenge arc in this story.
One last thing the kids support their mom and take care of her ! They’re so sweet !
Nppp. I low key can’t read revenge stories unless I know the bad guys get punished really badly lol .
Yes! Thank you. This is exactly what I remembered reading haha excited to see that man go to jail.
Wow really disgusting. Hope he and his mistress rot in jail.
hey did you read this from the novel, if so, can you hmu with the link
Buff guy is bottom.
Really? Or it just a guess?
No he is. The author/artist usually draws buff bottoms like in “same but different”
Ohh I imagined that was the case!
Omg I WOULD LOVE THAT
Saw it coming when they gave him shiny nipples
Very tru
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Demon king needs to hurry and grow up