beta
Honestly pretty good when read all at once. Taeyoon’s transition from captured “pet” to somewhat will participant could have been smoother as it felt like a blink and you’ll miss it switch. Outside of that I would have added like 5-10 more characters in between the kidnapped conflict from like chapter's 55-66 as these felt a bit rushed(I did however appreciate that the author didn’t op for a ‘he wouldn’t want this baby and I need to protect them’ style conflict even if it would have been justified considering Jae-in‘s past history with Choi) I would have also liked a media panel showing Choi’s downfall. Lastly I with there was more than one side story chapter detailing how Taeyoon & Jae-in navigating the pregnancy as well as the first year/s of parent hood; as well as some wholesome, domestic, slice of life, family chapters.