It's alright, but the whole pushing this into a romance problem is weird. The way she caught feelings is soooo weird man. They should've put more backstory on her feelings if they wanted to have her choose on 2 male leads. And the way of storytelling is too 3rd POV, that I really can't get behind any of it. Sorry, but this is just in my opinion. Happy reading everyone!
I hate all the hint of eroticism in this so much. It could be better without it ngl. ಠ,_ ｣ಠ
*Sol - slice of life
And still, a cliffhanger????? ARE YOU FKING SERIOUS RN??? (this is so good that I can't wait for more chapters)
The discoloration of his skin is literally due to the decay caused by the red curse. The way it's portrayed as discoloration is to simplify the damage for us viewers. We see him say that he looks so bad, that maybe it was way too long since the curse started that he looks that way, and that literally made him want to kill himself. Wtf??? Guys, the author can't be THAT blatantly racist in this social climate, okay?
Wow. This was absolute dogshit. They had such a good plot going on, why did they have to rush the story???? The stone slabs suddenly became useless, we didn't even delve into the crown princess's illness and inevitable death (in which case, she doesn't die bc of some medicine from the north or sum shit), the sudden event where Robel is also a diff, the whole edric being sick again???, and let's not forget, THE VILLAIN HEATH AND EMILIA(?) WORKING TOGETHER TO TAKE DOWN THE DUKE FAMILY????? ONLY FOR IT TO BE DEALT WITH IN LIKE LITERALLY 1 CHAPTER!!! Also, there was like a whole reintroduction of the potential male lead competitors (Manuel and blue haired guy), only for them to be forgotten like why have them in the first place???? AND HEATH, DID I MENTION HEATH??? WHAT THE FUCKS UP WITH HIM?? This was such a waste of good art.
I think that G really wants to help. But the way he's going at it is not right. He's treating them as just humans who are sick, when it's not as simple as that. In contrast to the other scientists who come to treat these people as now livestock. Like, he's thinking that they'll eventually get better with medicine and science, that they're gonna go back to being humans in due time. But most of these people already accept the changes in their bodies, like they're getting comfortable with how they are coming to be.
Like what the actual fuck is going on??? She has this background of being an intellectual, but she's dumb as shit!!! She constantly talks about running away and starting her own apothecary, but keeps on butting her damn nose in other ppl's business!!!! And like no one's stopping her from running away like wtf? (She's too forgiving on the step sis, why? Idfk) There were so many parts to the story where there would be NO ONE looking for her if she had run away. It was pretty annoying on how they try so hard to give a very "smart" image to the MC to the point where it's just trash.
What amplified my annoyance to this is the way they express the supposed emotions on certain scenes. Like wdym the MC straight up cries? I get being sympathetic and stuff, but she's just standing there tearing up in front of a royal.
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And on chapter 29???? Wtf was that reaction???????? It's like we're given a damsel in distress girlie with little to no application of her said intelligence.
Glad I'm taking this trash out to the dumpster, honestly.
Didn't expect a whole conspiracy with the yehma thing, and ch 22????? Wowwww wdym 'will u return to mesteria with us?'?????
The way Will became suspicious of a CHILD??? Just BC she was smart for her age and status? Like??????? AND TO INCLUDE IT ON A REPORT FOR THE PRINCE?????? WHAT????? Guys, you don't need to go that far to create a reason for establishing relations with royalty or nobility. You can do that with the magic outburst alone ಠ益ಠ
I agree that slapping her was a bit much, but look at it this way. In his eyes, she's their 10 year old little sister who got kidnapped with the risk of death and she tells them after being rescued that she's fine, she had a weapon, that they could kidnap her all they want and she's going to be fine, of course they're going to make her come back to 'reality'. He thinks that their innocent, sweet little sister is disregarding her own safety 'just because'. His thoughts probably were "Why would you think that?! Don't you know what would have happened?! Is all our worrying, and looking for you, for nothing??"
For me, if my lil sis was out there in danger and she comes back saying "nah it was fine, I was fine" and being real confident, whilst I was frantic looking for her and worrying abt her, ofc I'd be mad at her. Like, Idk be more worried about your situation????? Be more aware?? I know you know the dangers, but at LEAST be actually scared for your own safety.
I cannot read this anymore. I get that Yana was betrayed and all that, but she was a scam artist, and now she's trying to scam Kai, but she's still all "I cannot trust him, he's so confusing, why does he act like this to me" CRAZY ASS MF TF U MEAANN????? I really don't understand where her moral compass points, and I'm tired of it, KAI LITERALLY SAVED HER LIFE AND SHE DOESN'T EVEN THINK ABT IT!!!! I can prob guess how this goes so I'm dropping this right TF now. I can't recommend this, but if you guys think it's cute, then go ahead and read it.