beta
I honestly can’t believe I wasted so much emotional effort and time on this story. Like I genuinely thought after getting all those comments she would have changed the ending, hell I’d rather chapter 9 be the ending rather than 10. After all that she really decided to stay with Rose instead of literally just going back home, and no happy ending for Anna? The problem with short stories from this author is that she clearly doesn’t know how to develop anything. If this story was dragged out with Lily redemption arc it honestly proably would’ve been better.
This is like a 1-2.5 star rating honestly. I better not see any rose stans in the comments after she literally fucked up this girl relationship and perception of love just to isolate her and then not even be loyal to her.