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I like it but I feel like too much is going on

Nefarious000 July 19, 2021 8:08 pm

I like it but I feel like too much is going in at once? What do you guys think?

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AllMadHere July 19, 2021 8:18 pm

The sudden reveal about the whole Elizabeth lily backstory was... Way too soon ? I don't know what motivated it, but i could have done without it for many more chapters, or would have liked it better if we only saw fractions of it :/ now, i'm a lot less curious about the plot.

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Nefarious000 July 19, 2021 10:02 pm

The sudden reveal about the whole Elizabeth lily backstory was... Way too soon ? I don't know what motivated it, but i could have done without it for many more chapters, or would have liked it better if we only... AllMadHere

Same!! It came too soon!
Its too much for a beginning of a story but i kinda see where they are going

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