I love omegaverse but this one is out of it. The development is so rushed i finished reading it but i still ship tome and yuu. I didnt even came to like that sensei. Damn i hate the pairing. Tomo is an adorable thing that deserves love but yuu was using him. I hate both yuu and that sensei. Its so rushed like wtf why didnt tomo feel jealous. Why would he even be in a relationship with yuu if he doesnt love him. Like wtf it should have shown yuu and that sensei falling in love but more to that IT SHOULD SHOW MORE OF TOMO'S FEELINGS. It didnt even show tomo and that other omega guy falling in love more. There wasnt even a closure of feelings like tomo and yuu agreeing of breaking up, how they still got close with each other and such. Overall i didnt like it. I still ship Tomo with Yuu.
This would be the most perfect thing if maki's head is below the water before shuu could have save him and he just wakes up in a hospital with shuu sleeping next to him. This would make the story longer. I would love to see maki reject shuu becuz he thinks of his body as disgusting and more angst before the happy ending. But for me, this is still perfect becuz i always want this kind of angst where in there is a suicide attempt scene and such.
I know what you mean! I felt like there was so much raw emotion here that it would have been nice to see that played up more. That doesn't go away just because he finally had sex with the guy he loved. But I did really enjoy that it didn't gloss over what happened to him. It's so rare to see even this much of a fallout.
They shouldn't have killed Tetsuo's character. Maybe just put him in a coma...