
As a novel reader I’m not touching this until the mirror scene. Like, I don’t wanna get my mental health destroyed again, unless I also get to see it being kinda resolved

SPOILER :
So after Freya tells Iz about the kiss. How Iz would react! Will he think ill of Ruby or he will gather the pieces in his brain and conclude that her brother is the evil in her life. Will Ruby tell Iz's sister or at least Iz what she have been through and that her brother Is abusing her !!!

This story is a good example of good idea and art. Bad execution. Like, it isn’t the worst, and something about this story seems very intriguing, but it all just seems so random and surface level. There’s barely any explanation for a lot of things, and it sometimes feels like a chapter is missing, when they’re referring to conversations and things we didn’t see. you were good. I’m waiting for you to be great :/
I know they’re a bit freaky, but I feel like they match each others freak, and they do it for fun. Meanwhile JK was only ever thinking of himself, and when him and Dan did it, it always seemed like JK was doing a science experiment for his own pleasure ( ̄へ ̄)
Dan signed up for it tho
I don’t know if being pressured into it because of financial difficulties and then being treated like an object is really signing up for it
I think agreeing to a deal and asking for MORE MONEY and consenting to JK’s rules is a choice. I know plenty of people who don’t do certain things no matter how much financial trouble they are in. Decision was his and he took it don’t pretend like Jk twisted his arm
I get where you’re coming from, and maybe it’s because I on principle don’t agree with Sex work, but I think we’ll have to agree to disagree. My original comment was also more about how I personally like the second couple more. Sex work or not, I just like to read more about both people having fun together. No matter who has the moral high ground in the story.
At the end of the day, this is just fiction and we have seen asshole tops been redeemed before.
Still looking forward to the 2nd season(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ