
And I know I shouldn’t compare...but walk on water is damn better than this... not sure why I can’t totally get into this.... Ed and Glenn had me ch 1.... but I will read and savor every chapter....

Walk on water was more philosophical and more depth
Despite the fact that it's setting was around pornography. It was very pure and heartwarming story at least for me. And I grudgingly loved every bit of the monologue. So I understand where you are coming from. But let's not compare these two, lets just enjoy the Smut for now and wait for further development
What was with the premeditated m*rder…google search on the screen….
If you look closer it looks like it's a play or screenwriting competition called "premeditated murder" so it's nothing concerning
Awesome…I didn’t like that direction…thank you