
The amount of time I raged over every chapter is not enough to express how bad the characters are portrayed and the plot felt-so rushed up. Didn’t bother to read every dialogue coz its so messed up. How you gon run away from the palace and wanting to divorce to competing to be holy maiden to marry the same King again? Like gurrllll!!! Do you not have self respect? Oh and the shitty King he is so bad like really really bad. He screams small dick energy. Ya all need to talk seriously.
*sighs* Ok feels good after venting….BYE…..

Havn’t read this yet, but whats with the eyes? Its like when Spongebob and Patrick were drying out…..

I gave it a lot of thought at the beginning as well. I draw as well, so something seemed weird. I came to the conclusion that the problem are the faces, not the eyes (as much) they have big cheeks like a baby, and realistic eyes, looks weird. With time, the style gets much better for proportions, and they still have realistic eyes, but they look good now, at least, you also get used to it.
There is kind of prequel story to this called Night of Blasphemy (Yaoi)